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~Please Help Me~ (Free Style) Please help me! Nobody loves me I need a shoulder I need to cry on you Please help me! I'm alone today I don't know what to do And nobody loves me Please help me! Please rescue me Please be with me I got no one you see Help! Help me! Please please me! There's no place to grow And I got no place to go Life sucks! You hear me right Everything is black or white And often I am losing sight I think me dumb but they see me bright I am trapped against the wall And my world is so small Therefore I need a white knight Someone to take me right thru the night I am in so much pain I only feel the rain Life sucks! You hear me right Everything is black or white Please help me! Someone help me! Someone listen to me! I am in pain today I look at me and I look at you I'll be okay they say But it's hard you see There's no place to grow There's no place to go I got no love to show And life is filled of woes Please help me Anyone please help me I need your shoulder So I can cry on you Please help me! Anyone please help me! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2007 January,02,2015 Inspired by many teen's cries I see and hear.A heartbreaking cry for love,help or just attention.Do I remember those? Yes, I do :)What about you?

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Date: 1/3/2015 4:03:00 AM
I am glad this isn't about you...prayers for all thinking this way.,..hugs Tim
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Date: 1/2/2015 6:47:00 PM
h Dorian what a sad sad poem, I wish I could help, there are so many teens out there crying out for help and I only wish I could be there for them, this is one lovely write my friend, happy new year and take care...............Vera................
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:04:00 PM
yes, many lonely tears I have cried . . . your poem touched these heartaches and brought voice to this melancholy journey. Your words an inspiration to reach out and love the hurting. Much love Dorian 7+
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