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Please Hear Me

Today Thee I pray Please hear what I say All pain just go away Date Written:8/21/2021 2 Place Your Favorite Rhyme Poem in August 2021 Contest Judged: 9/2/2021 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 9/2/2021 3:54:00 PM

Paula, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/3/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your "Rhyme" contest. I wrote it about all the pain Carolyn Devonshire went through. Then after she left us the pain we had. Have a great/blessed day..................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/22/2021 11:08:00 AM

A heartfelt write. I feel the same and say same prayer when I am in pain. A winner for me

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad it is a winner for you. Have a great/blessed day..................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/22/2021 9:48:00 AM

Empathy allows us to feel another's pain. your prayerful hope will resonate with those in need...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:11:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like my prayer. We need to help others. Have a great/blessed day..................

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2021 12:03:00 AM

Great prayer, Paula, good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Many are in pain all over the world. Have a great/blessed day..................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/21/2021 3:31:00 PM

Hello Paula, yes I do hope that your pain will go away. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/22/2021 10:54:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes many are in pain all over the world. There is too much sorrow going on. I hope it will change. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this prayer write. I am Not in pain. It is Not for me. It is for the many that are hurting and are in pain. Many are in pain all over the world. Have a great/blessed day..................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/21/2021 1:08:00 PM

I hope your prayers will be answered and the pain fades away. Thanks for your precious visit and comment on my page

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2021 8:50:00 AM

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2021 12:09:00 PM

Nothing worse than a constant pain Paula, I hope your prayers are soon answered. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2021 12:23:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this prayer. It is not for me. It is for the many that are hurting and are in pain. Many are in pain all over the world. Hope all is OK with you. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..................