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Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/5/2017 10:48:00 AM

IIII KKKIIIINNNDDD OOF LLLLike IIT, butttt iit is SSSAAADDD.

Darren White
Date: 2/5/2017 10:56:00 AM

Hahaha, thank you, nah it's not sad at all :) I am stuttering and ticcing my whole life. It's time to approach it with a little bit if humour :)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 2/4/2017 11:16:00 AM

I loved how you passed a message and the humour behing it... I did play along, not just reading the words between spaces, but the whole poem - well done, my friend :*

Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 11:51:00 AM

Yep, so much fun to do, glad you read all the letters :)

Carol B.

Date: 2/4/2017 8:40:00 AM

This is clearly an important message and so well Done! Great creative write.

Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 11:02:00 AM

It is Carol, but important messages brought with a bit of humour makes it so much better :)

John Herlihy

Date: 2/4/2017 8:07:00 AM

Not only fun, very inventive. Congrats. JH

Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 8:16:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read it :)

White Wolf

Date: 2/3/2017 5:09:00 PM

Yes, you can read the message loud and clear in this! Duir! People just have to learn to be more patient when you talk is all! Very cleverly done my poetic/artistic friend!

Darren White
Date: 2/4/2017 12:13:00 AM

Thanks Budgie, it's a fun poem too, right?

Sara Ella

Date: 2/3/2017 7:16:00 AM

Smiling, relaxing, reading between the spaces. :D I would love to play too! Love this Darren <3

Darren White
Date: 2/3/2017 7:26:00 AM

It's playfully serious :) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2017 6:11:00 AM

oh ssssooo clever Darren you are highlighting issues which are rarely talked about:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 2/3/2017 6:14:00 AM

Wow that was the fastest reply ever Jan!! :) I hit POST, and there was your reply :) Could you read the message by the way? I want to make sure people see I actually wrote something there in between the stuttering.