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Please Come Home

Please come home It's been a while since you've been gone I've been missing you... all along and it breaks my heart... to wait another day I know that you have made mistakes, and I know how ... your heart aches, I want you to know... that you're welcome home Chorus Please come home, my love it's time for a new start I've been waiting... for all these years... please...come home I know a lot of things have changed.. and to you...it may sound strange... you've been in my heart... my love's not gone away I know that it has taken time... for us both to realize... we are made to be... one eternally Chorus Please come home, my love... it's time for a new start... I've been waiting... for all these years... please...come home It's been a while since you've been gone... please ... come ... home. John Derek Hamilton August 27,2019

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/4/2019 8:06:00 AM

this hit me very hard, I recently made a mistake and it cost me a fight with my hubby. But he forgave me and we did not go to bed angry. It was like he was speaking to me thru your words. He is way too understanding! jk, great lyrics dear John, really touched my heart today and helped me realize forgiveness is real and can happen if you have true love. Be blessed :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2019 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Laura, glad my words had an impact with you, sorry you've had troubles but true love is revealed through difficulties, thanks for you kind support!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/3/2019 6:42:00 PM

Ah to want your to come home! Expression that flowed holding some depth! Very nice!;)

John Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2019 12:37:00 PM

Thanks Brenda, it's a simple song, but glad you could see the depth of meaning, glad you passed by my way!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/31/2019 8:16:00 PM

Hi John, First of let me say that you are such a gifted song writer and I hope someone "big" sees your work. Your lyrics ( song) was heartfelt and emotional. I (most) can relate to such a write. Who hasn't experienced heartbreak? No one. Keep writing and keep the faith, it only takes one( someone too get your songs in the right hands)Enjoy the rest of your weekend my friend:-) Alexis

John Hamilton
Date: 9/1/2019 9:44:00 PM

Wow Alexis this is one of the best comments I've ever had, you really made my day/night, thanks you so much for your kind words of encouragement!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/29/2019 3:45:00 PM

Nice one John, so well written with a real plea from the heart, lovely lyrics!

John Hamilton
Date: 8/30/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Gordon glad you liked it enough to comment. I appreciate your kind visit

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/29/2019 2:37:00 PM

I like this John. Very nice! I can feel it, too. Excellent :)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2019 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Heidi so nice of you to drop by, glad you liked this simple tune!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/28/2019 3:10:00 PM

This is beautiful John! I could feel the emotion in your words. I hope you have it put to music. I'm sure it would do well as a country or pop rock song. It just needs the attention of a singer to make it fly! xxoo

John Hamilton
Date: 8/29/2019 1:47:00 PM

Thanks Connie for recognizing it's potential, I would indeed be thankful if I could persuade a composer or singer of note to tackle this and many of the 150 songs I've written, sadly the odds are firmly stacked against that as a probable outcome, but glad for your appreciation and visit today!

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/28/2019 12:03:00 PM

The message here is pure and heartfelt. It comes across beautifully as you write this lyric. Enjoyed this one, John! :)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2019 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Laura nice to "see" you pass by my page today!

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/28/2019 9:26:00 AM

Ready to love again... A love pleading one...Nicely done

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2019 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Arturo!

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/28/2019 9:05:00 AM

sometimes nothing can fill the voids except the one who put them there...this feels heartfelt and full of emotion, good write my friend! :) hugs

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2019 9:25:00 AM

Thanks sandy I know it's a simple offering but sometimes that's what comes out, glad the emotion was noticeable. I thank you for your kind comment and support!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2019 7:53:00 AM

Very evocative of love..missing a true friend..special longing one gets after separation from genuine love. I hear the regret but mostly the bond that wises to reconnect..a lovely write, John.

John Hamilton
Date: 8/28/2019 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Vijay, interesting you noticed regret, I never noticed it but now I see it, glad you like this simple offering!

Chris Green

Date: 8/27/2019 2:21:00 PM

Very cool my friend. The message in this is strong and i could feel the emotions deeply.

John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2019 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Chris you know I value your opinion very much. This one although simple in it's phrasing has a depth of emotion. I'm glad you picked that out, very gratifying.