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You know who I am when you see me. And I know What I wish, What I want it to be. O, whenever I see you I hope, I wish It might be true. I see that look Upon your face. My frowns you seem To just erase, When I see that look upon your face. I know there's more To me and you. An eagle, soaring soaring Forever true. Yet alone we find Ourselves forlorn, Shrouded in doubt, And covered in scorn. Oh, cant you see There's so much more. So please,oh please Open that door.

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Date: 3/1/2010 9:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sienna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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