Please

You know who I am 
when you see me.

And I know 
What I wish,
What I want it to be.

O, whenever I see you
I hope, I wish
It might be true.

I see that look
Upon your face.
My frowns you seem
To just erase,
When I see that look
upon your face.

I know there's more
To me and you.
An eagle, soaring soaring
Forever true.

Yet alone we find 
Ourselves forlorn,
Shrouded in doubt,
And covered in scorn.

Oh, cant you see
There's so much more. 
So please,oh please
Open that door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 1, 2010 at 9:07 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sienna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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