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Please, Don'T Stop the Melody

In the blink of an eye A foreboding sky of clouds Appeared as a decry Pain like a fist hitting my guts By the sudden silence of a melody Because I thought you were hurt While you were away And I couldn't bear such thought. Then I heard your voice again Bluer became my skies Filled with the warm glow Of the sun's brazen smile That gives me the reason To hang on to the hopes Of better things to come Because you came into my life. By CarolineCecile Copyright © Feb. 19, 2011.

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Date: 2/20/2011 12:48:00 PM
Lovely lilting lines Caroline.. one special person in one's life can make all the difference as your words gladly express .. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry and contest entry luv.. enjoy your weekend...
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Date: 2/20/2011 9:38:00 AM
I love the reflection of hope in your lines Caroline, we sometimes forget that whatever happens there is always hope.. Thanks for the reminder.. beautiful write :)
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:34:00 AM
a poem of reality - love fear hope and joy. Cool Caroline!
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:21:00 AM
Very inspiring write my dear.. as the good Dr. says below..a poem of hope....always Michael
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:32:00 PM
A nice poem on hope hope and quite inspiring thoughts, Caroline
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:03:00 PM
I do hope this works out and the man is everything you could ever want, Caroline. You deserve the best. Your poem is so inspiring and filled with hope. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. Love you, Carolyn
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