Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Free verse

Please, Don'T Stop the Melody

In the blink of an eye
A foreboding sky of clouds
Appeared as a decry
Pain like a fist hitting my guts
By the sudden silence of a melody
Because I thought you were hurt
While you were away
And I couldn't bear such thought. 

Then I heard your voice again
Bluer became my skies
Filled with the warm glow
Of the sun's brazen smile
That gives me the reason
To hang on to the hopes
Of better things to come
Because you came into my life. 

By CarolineCecile
Copyright  © Feb. 19,  2011.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2011 at 12:48 PM Lovely lilting lines Caroline.. one special person in one's life can make all the difference as your words gladly express .. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry and contest entry luv.. enjoy your weekend...

Wilma Neels February 20, 2011 at 9:38 AM I love the reflection of hope in your lines Caroline, we sometimes forget that whatever happens there is always hope.. Thanks for the reminder.. beautiful write :)

Robert A. Dufresne February 20, 2011 at 6:34 AM a poem of reality - love fear hope and joy. Cool Caroline!

Michael J. Falotico February 20, 2011 at 5:21 AM Very inspiring write my dear.. as the good Dr. says below..a poem of hope....always Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta February 19, 2011 at 5:32 PM A nice poem on hope hope and quite inspiring thoughts, Caroline

Carolyn Devonshire February 19, 2011 at 5:03 PM I do hope this works out and the man is everything you could ever want, Caroline. You deserve the best. Your poem is so inspiring and filled with hope. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. Love you, Carolyn