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Playing With Fire

His arms fling with might, a disturbing display Outside himself, he’s engulfed in shocking flames He moves with a glow of fire, power today Jumping through the air, popping never ashamed His strength seems to be my weakness, I’m in awe Whirling about with thoughts to break death, to thaw Opening the senses to burning embers Playing with fire is where he moves, meanders
Russell Sivey Contest: Playing With Fire Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 11/27/2013

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Date: 12/11/2013 4:44:00 PM
An excellent and powerful piece Russell. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:12:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Russell
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:40:00 PM
Hi Russell, Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:21:00 PM
Stunning write, Russell. Well done!
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:44:00 AM
Very effective piece, I think Linda will be pleased with it.
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:22:00 PM
magical setting like a display of stunning act, russell... the blending of words brings an exhilirating mood throughout your piece.. you simply enchant me today... what a dazzling piece!...huggs!
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:54:00 AM
This scene I would like to see..Reads like it is a dangerous act..Winning material for sure..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments give me hope..Sara
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:40:00 AM
The swing of power destroys us with permanent burn. Your words are aflame, daring and piercing!
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Date: 11/27/2013 7:08:00 AM
Choreography of flames and feelings fantastically interwoven!
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:06:00 AM
Nice expressions on playing with fire, Russell
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