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Playing Linguistic Tag In Sunny Forest - Cq

I see russian sunny bunnies* playing tag with english sundogs * Sunlight spot in Russian is sunny bunny (solnechny zaichik). 01.09.2019 Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina Syllables Per Line: 4 4 4 4

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2019 6:00:00 PM

BAck with my Congrats, Kurt. Yours was one of the most charming ones on the winners' list.

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2019 11:37:00 AM

Kurt congratulations on your win, excellent ***

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Haiku, Kurt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2019 6:48:00 AM

Great imagery, Kurt. I love when I am taught something through poetry. Nice write and very well done! Congratulations on your win. All the best.. Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2019 1:36:00 PM

I love this adorable form and the imagery it bestows. This is a Fave for me Kurt! Thank you for the translation. xxoo : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 5:10:00 PM

oh this is so cute. I used to be a sundog. Now I stay inside avoiding sunlight for fear of skin cancer!! (and taking my vitamin D from a bottle of supplements) I got too much sun through my youth! not good on the skin. Thanks what you said about my Chase poem. You are a sunny bunny for me at Soup.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 9/2/2019 6:00:00 AM

Sorry about the sun, Andrea. On the contrary, I constantly lack of it. P.S.: Your Chase is great.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 5:10:00 PM

I see you have a bag over your head. Are you avoiding the sun as well? haha. I just had to say that!!!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 9/2/2019 5:54:00 AM

Heh) Actually, I love sun. Ravidas is translated from Sanskrit as a servant of the sun. I'm just a bit shy servant)