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Playing in the Sun

Enjoying a hazy, hot summer day I won't let soiled dishes get in the way They can sit in the sink Even though they do stink I will drink rum out in the sun and play 6/4/2020 Contest: Summer Laziness Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 6/25/2020 4:10:00 PM
Great Limerick.. It's freshness is amazing. Fun, fun, fun poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/10/2020 5:31:00 AM
Why should it be "all work and no play"!! Housework is never ending, so a break now and again is recommended :) Regards // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/14/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
Date: 6/8/2020 4:21:00 PM
I agree...though a cold beer is my quencher. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/8/2020 6:29:00 PM
Rum in a tropical iced drink! Thank you for visit Joe!
Date: 6/6/2020 9:23:00 AM
I like how you roll. Dishes be damned, seize the day!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/8/2020 6:29:00 PM
Ha ha, thank you Rick!
Date: 6/6/2020 12:45:00 AM
G'day Tania … and why not. The dishes won't run away and the rum will keep summer heat at bay - thanks Tania - Lindsay
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/6/2020 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay!
Date: 6/5/2020 3:11:00 AM
You and I are birds of the same feather. My sink is full of cutlery to be washed. Darn, I prefer rum. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2020 5:07:00 AM
Ha ha, my poem is fictional Victor, but I agree having a drink in the sun is better than doing dishes! Hugs.
Date: 6/4/2020 1:10:00 PM
here here I think it is great advice lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2020 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Jan! hugs