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Playing in the Sun

Enjoying a hazy, hot summer day I won't let soiled dishes get in the way They can sit in the sink Even though they do stink I will drink rum out in the sun and play 6/4/2020 Contest: Summer Laziness Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/25/2020 4:10:00 PM

Great Limerick.. It's freshness is amazing. Fun, fun, fun poem.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2020 6:23:00 PM

Thank you

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2020 5:31:00 AM

Why should it be "all work and no play"!! Housework is never ending, so a break now and again is recommended :) Regards // paul

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/14/2020 5:39:00 PM

Thank you Paul!

Joe DiMino

Date: 6/8/2020 4:21:00 PM

I agree...though a cold beer is my quencher. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/8/2020 6:29:00 PM

Rum in a tropical iced drink! Thank you for visit Joe!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2020 9:23:00 AM

I like how you roll. Dishes be damned, seize the day!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/8/2020 6:29:00 PM

Ha ha, thank you Rick!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/6/2020 12:45:00 AM

G'day Tania … and why not. The dishes won't run away and the rum will keep summer heat at bay - thanks Tania - Lindsay

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/6/2020 5:03:00 AM

Thank you Lindsay!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/5/2020 3:11:00 AM

You and I are birds of the same feather. My sink is full of cutlery to be washed. Darn, I prefer rum. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2020 5:07:00 AM

Ha ha, my poem is fictional Victor, but I agree having a drink in the sun is better than doing dishes! Hugs.

JAN ALLISON

Date: 6/4/2020 1:10:00 PM

here here I think it is great advice lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2020 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Jan! hugs