Vijay Pandit Poet Personification

Playful

Feasting on my splendor ravishing to your eyes
Greet me seductively, watch me bathe in sunrise,
Breathing me in, devouring scent of intimacy,
Caressing my breeze teasing you affectionately
Cuddling love’s essence in elysium of my affinity
Holding me in your trance of her magical allure
Enamoring doting senses of passions I conjure
Feeling her tender beats in fragility of my heart
Indulging softly in her fascination for romance
Tempting me longingly in glamor of her glance
As purple cheeks blush, titillating my ruby visage 
Fantasizing silken lips inflaming euphoric kiss,

But, dare not pluck me young man, till I’m willing
Undressing sensuously, revealing inner beauty,
Unveiling my core, arousing petals of yearning~
Only then I will be ready, worthy of your promise,
When you present me to her, she’ll be beaming
For I am the rose of her dreams, elixir of ecstasy.

September 25, 2021
Placed 1st: “P” Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Playful

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Valsa George November 13, 2021 at 7:56 AM What fantastic series of images spun around a rose.....'arousing petals of yearning' in all those who read it. No doubt you are a master of your art, Vijay !

Mike Bayles October 22, 2021 at 7:36 AM Very nice rhyme, Vijay.

Susan Ashley October 12, 2021 at 9:53 AM Simply splendid, Vijay! Your lush and luscious imagery is steeped in sensual romantic glorious beauty! Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit October 13, 2021 at 6:11 AM Glad to see you again Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Kim Rodrigues October 6, 2021 at 6:30 AM I love this line: Undressing sensuously, revealing inner beauty./ This poem, Vijay, is a fave! Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:38 AM I am honored by your visit Kim and wonderful feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Sam Kauffman October 5, 2021 at 12:15 PM "Watch me bathe in sunrise," " arousing petals of yearning," "elysium of my affinity" these and so many other amazing poetic images and word combinations flow from your pen like the fragrance of this rose Vijay. I love the way you write from the perspective, and hopes, of the rose! I will never look at a rose the same way. Beautiful. A fave for me. Congratulations and blessings. Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:37 AM I am glad Sam you stopped by with these delightful comments. Your feedback is always appreciated and valued. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Constance La France October 5, 2021 at 8:30 AM Vijay, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:34 AM Always a joy when you visit, Constance. Much appreciate. Many thanks for hosting contests.

Supraja Kannan October 1, 2021 at 5:41 AM Brilliant... Lovely twist in the second stanza... I didn't expect it... So beautifully described the bloom of a rose... Lovely!!! Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:34 AM You are so very kind. Much appreciate, Supraja. Many thanks.

Ann Peck September 30, 2021 at 9:51 AM "Fantasizing silken lips inflaming euphoric kiss..." That is beautiful, Vijay. The entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations on first place win! Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:33 AM Glad you stopped by with your delightful comments, Ann. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh September 30, 2021 at 6:18 AM Beautiful. Love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 6:32 AM Much appreciate Gina--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 28, 2021 at 4:46 AM Tender, romantic, sensual, and inspiring, my dearest friend, Vijay! It has all the characteristics of a winner! Good luck! Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:26 AM So very kind of you Demetrios. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. September 28, 2021 at 1:49 AM WoW! Vijay, I found this to be well-written, sensual, romantic, and playful. I could say more about this captivating and top-notch write. Well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:26 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Harry Horsman September 27, 2021 at 10:40 PM On the winners list, with this beautiful poetry. Congratulations, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:25 AM Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith September 27, 2021 at 2:01 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "Playful" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day with your win............... Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:25 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Jan Allison September 27, 2021 at 12:53 PM so sensual and romantic, beautiful to see love blooming, Many congratulations on your win: Vijay-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:24 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jan. Many thanks.

CayCay Godwin September 27, 2021 at 9:59 AM Hey, I've been gone for awhile - missed reading your poems. I may know something at this moment that you do not - 1st place congrats are where you belong- the depth and tone, oh! What a good, good write. I enjoyed and send congrats to you on your 1st place win ... CayCay Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:24 AM Glad you are back, CayCay. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks for stopping by.

Judy Ball September 27, 2021 at 7:57 AM WoW Vijay! This is so cleverly and beautifully expressed. This is the rose slowly opening her blooms Love it. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit September 27, 2021 at 8:49 AM Yes indeed--the rose slowly opening...revealing. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Judy. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2021 at 7:56 PM Feeling her tender beats in fragility of my heart… As purple cheeks blush, titillating my ruby visage: love especially those lines, dear Vijay! Vijay Pandit September 27, 2021 at 6:26 AM Glad to hear that Kim. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many Thanks.

Paul Callus September 26, 2021 at 1:23 PM This is excellent sensual personification, Vijay, and the vocabulary used is as delightful as ever. ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit September 27, 2021 at 6:25 AM Much appreciate. Many thanks, Paul, your visit and comments. Regards.

Victor Buhagiar September 26, 2021 at 7:07 AM Excellent portrait of nature in is sensual attire. Perfectly modulated to attract the love embodied in nature, Best for a win. Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 12:09 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. Many thanks, as always.

Heidi Sands September 26, 2021 at 6:42 AM Great personification Vijay! Well written. I hope you have a nice Sunday:) Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 12:08 PM Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate, as always. Enjoyed this lovely weekend.

Mike Gentile September 26, 2021 at 5:06 AM You have perfectly captured the essence of a rose with this top notch Personification Vijay! I bet it does very well in the contest!! Happy Sunday! Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 6:04 AM I am happy to dwell in your words of confidence, Mike. Much appreciate your feedback, as always. Many thanks.

Suzanne Delaney September 26, 2021 at 4:36 AM Very sensual, Vijay: Certainly playful. Best, SuZ Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 6:02 AM Glad you stopped by SuZ. Haven't seen you much lately. Many thanks for your visit and kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole September 25, 2021 at 5:53 PM "revealing inner beauty" That is exactly how it should be. This is so beautiful and romantic, holding the right amount of playfulness and passion. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 6:01 AM Glad you liked the playful passion of the poem my friend. That is special-- as you are the master of tender, romantic poems. Many thanks, Brandy.

Gordon Mcconnell September 25, 2021 at 1:10 PM Great piece of imagery and insightfulness Vijay, very well written indeed. Take care, Gordon Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 5:59 AM Glad you stopped by Gordon with your insightful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet September 25, 2021 at 11:34 AM A very well-written poem that is both sensual and sentimental. Vijay, you truly are the king of this type of writing. Your phrasing was flawless, and I liked your rhyme, which was visually appealing—best wishes for your success in the contest. Vijay Pandit September 26, 2021 at 5:58 AM You always spread goodwill on Poetry Soup, Lasaad. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

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