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Play-A Romantic Adventure

Written by the hands, Of James Matthew Barrie. Came a remarkable play, Of four kids and a fairy. Of a boy named Peter, Who took Wendy by the hand. Leading her and her brothers, To the magic of Neverland. With childish innocence, Written in every line. This ingenious play, Stood the test of time. For Peter never ages, He’ll never be a man. Solely a boy forever, Thus.......Peter Pan. With a little pixie dust, Off the wings of Tinker Bell. Came a romantic adventure, In the words of a fairy tale.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/14/2009 12:22:00 PM
this is really good.... it sums up the main characters for most of it! i love it
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Date: 1/6/2009 6:59:00 PM
I'm glad you like Peter Pan too. It's one of my favorite books. This is a sweet poem. The rhyming feels very natural. I have a few suggestions. Line 2, 18, and 20 have too many syllables so the rhythm is thrown off a bit. Maybe reword or shorten them somehow? Also, I think this poem could work just as well without any end punctuation because the line breaks are natural stopping points. Try it and see what you think. Thanks for writing this!
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Date: 12/16/2008 5:05:00 PM
A great poem for a classic fairytale...........Nice!
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Date: 12/10/2008 1:19:00 AM
"Peter Pan is a good story and most of all a good play. You did a good job with this one. You seem to surprise me everytime I read your next poem. I never can guess you, you are always unpredictable. Great write though. DN"
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Date: 12/7/2008 6:24:00 AM
This is wonderful, Raul. So beautifully written. I love Peter Pan and I thought this was such a nice tribute and a brilliantly inspired write. Love Robin
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:37:00 PM
Such a sweet story of Peter Pan...a poem to read to children! :) Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:30:00 PM
Raul you have done this adventure beautiful that a tribute. Love this poem one of your best flowing words theme excellent Raul. Your brother in Christ Michael
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:15:00 PM
Awesome tribute. This story will always appeal to the child within us all. It is pure magic and wonder and I believe one of everyone's favorite. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:08:00 PM
Nice tribute to the magic of Peter Pan. I really enjoyed it. BG
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:58:00 PM
Awe, Peter Pan was my favorite cartoon. This brings me good memories. I too never wanted to grow up.
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:40:00 PM
Nice tribute Raul, all children never want to grow old. DN
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