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Planet Teat

Each moment in time is a precious wee treat Never to live again unless you're from Planet Teat On Planet Teat, moments last years Sitting on the popo would suck I fear But I'll bumble through, a lengthy novel I'll read

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Date: 12/25/2017 9:40:00 AM
Tickling my teats! The only other poem I've seen that word in one of my own ;p love it! Merry Christmas hugs sweet Jack!! hail Lord of Planet Teat!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2017 9:48:00 AM
And a very Merry Christmas to you my dear sweet Maureen!!! Lovesies, Jack xxxxxxx
Date: 12/25/2017 8:12:00 AM
Me mind does a bit of a wander//as I read this, sip coffee and ponder//Is it Planet Teat?//or Planett Eat//Either way it is over yonder. MERRY CHRISTMAS SANTA!!!
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Date: 12/25/2017 8:35:00 AM
Watch yer mouth buster!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2017 8:18:00 AM
AND A BIG HAPPY TO YOU AND YOUR LADY, MY FOREVER BUDDY!!! Any s*** yet???
Date: 12/25/2017 7:03:00 AM
Now that Jack is over eighty, his mind is his directory. So many chapters, of happy ever afters, leave an everlasting memory.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2017 7:11:00 AM
Been down many roads... enjoying this one as much as any!!!
Date: 12/25/2017 6:53:00 AM
Indeed it is my friend... especially when we feel these moments could be our last..
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2017 7:10:00 AM
Merry Christmas my good buddy... may our friendship last forever!!! Jacko!!!

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