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Planes



"Planes" 

Sea planes cross my vision 
the bridge gleams 
in all its shining golden splendour

laughing at me 
cajoling the dream
like I'm on an abstract mission

I paint the canvas in words dripping honey
amber coloured cashmere strokes softly brushing satin skin 
over you dappled deep waters and your silvery shadows

recalling 
the sensual shape of love 
incorporal, velvet warm, flowing 

in all its stars and planets

turquoise spills over you 
the depth of a cool plunge
you watch on

I am treading water 
an Opera in front of me
monsters underneath me 

the feeling of silky fins
sandpaper grazes 
the terror shelved in the forgotten 

your bright smile bleeds
burning hot into me
calling me back in,

like the Sun;

somewhere underneath,
the monsters circling
watch on



Candide Diderot. ‘25 





"She said, "The battle's almost won
And we're only several miles from the Sun"
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March 22, 2025 at 12:53 AM
"The Sun"/Maroon 5.
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March 22, 2025 at 12:53 AM
https://youtu.be/cnXVKlebQqc?si=E4syHv9NtcyuoZsC
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March 22, 2025 at 12:53 AM
LYRICS/"The Sun", Maroon 5. https://genius.com/Maroon-5-the-sun-lyrics
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