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"Planes" Sea planes cross my vision the bridge gleams in all its shining golden splendour laughing at me cajoling the dream like I'm on an abstract mission I paint the canvas in words dripping honey amber coloured cashmere strokes softly brushing satin skin over you dappled deep waters and your silvery shadows recalling the sensual shape of love incorporal, velvet warm, flowing in all its stars and planets turquoise spills over you the depth of a cool plunge you watch on I am treading water an Opera in front of me monsters underneath me the feeling of silky fins sandpaper grazes the terror shelved in the forgotten your bright smile bleeds burning hot into me calling me back in, like the Sun; somewhere underneath, the monsters circling watch on Candide Diderot. ‘25 "She said, "The battle's almost won And we're only several miles from the Sun"

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Date: 3/22/2025 12:53:00 AM
"The Sun"/Maroon 5.
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Date: 3/22/2025 12:53:00 AM
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Date: 3/22/2025 12:53:00 AM
LYRICS/"The Sun", Maroon 5. https://genius.com/Maroon-5-the-sun-lyrics

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