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Here in this place with actual grace, Word your own trace with happy face. Bloom where you room with precious blooms, Learn thus to groom fond fest that zooms. Set your sure dream upon a theme, Fit a pure scheme in lavish streams. Learn that you know more than you show, Wear a fine glow that syncs with flow. You know you can live your fond plan, Start to now scan a happy trend. Start to see light that channels bright, Love knows what's right that brings clear sight. Here in good time the sacred rhymes, Heed vivid chimes that hide in mimes. Leon Enriquez 12 May 2018 Hamlet Place, ACT

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/12/2018 5:21:00 PM

Good write, Leon. My favorite couplet is the middle one. When we quit learning we quit living. People are always telling me that a person doesn't know what he doesn't know...I don't think that's always true..we just forget some things until we need them and then they're there at our command.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/13/2018 8:22:00 AM

Dear Reason: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.