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Gently, on a baked ceiling of a park a boy ruffles my fluttering skirt like a naughty, vagrant wing, and picks a baseball on the grass… this smaller kid of almond eyes clutches it with a longing to play, but he could not; his legs gave way. Yet, he claps like all the other kids such a radiant joy with wobbly feet, that I liven him up to pitch for one round, while the team rallies for a new swing. Taking in the fire of the crimson day, a lean figure of almond eyes takes his spot grasping the orb as if it were a white globe. In a precise twirl, the fast ball reels, curving much higher, splitting the air until those limbs swivel off freely… the batter out: through joy and pain, one young limping boy of summer’s dream is never going to be the same again. -------------- 12/8/2015 Contest: Oil Paintings 4 & 5 of Eve Roper By nette onclaud

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Date: 12/16/2015 9:20:00 PM
NETTE :) CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN...... SKAT
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Date: 12/13/2015 1:12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much ... CayCay
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Date: 12/11/2015 6:52:00 PM
One could tell this story sadly, but you've gradually departed from that coarse cloth to weave in strands of silver and gold, so that it dances joyously in light. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:54:00 AM
Compelling poetry which allows me to recall my boyhood! I am eeply moved.
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Date: 12/7/2015 2:25:00 PM
- Nette, this is lovely and touching lines from a picture - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2015 2:09:00 PM
You've captured a different side of this game. It drew me into the poignant round of the play; brilliant indeed, woman !
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Date: 12/7/2015 1:57:00 PM
This is baseball for a real, little champ. I can't help but dive into the tender beat of this extraordinary poem. Grateful I clicked on this!
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Date: 12/7/2015 1:31:00 PM
Oh Nette this is a very touching interpretation of the picture - it brought a lump to my throat - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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