Pir-O-Wet

She could do an axel and spin go higher and do it again when she heard the crack she never looked back as she passed the sign that read THIN 12/29/2020 Winter Snow or Ice Limerick Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin - sponsor

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Margarita Lillico

Date: 1/23/2021 8:54:00 AM

Clever&Cute :) M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2021 12:04:00 PM

OH OH!!! VERY well written limerick, John. Congrats

Josefina Costales

Date: 1/10/2021 10:58:00 AM

Intriguing title, pushed me to read - my surprise, it’s a funny limerick. Great job and congrats for the win.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2021 3:32:00 PM

the title creased me up and the poem is witty, many congrats John:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2021 1:51:00 PM

Your work is a winner way to go..Congrats. Sara

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/8/2021 11:33:00 AM

I never played in a frozen pond as a child, too scared. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/8/2021 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, John! At least she stayed dry

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/8/2021 5:46:00 AM

Funny, funny John! Love the title. :)) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/8/2021 4:04:00 AM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your witty and funny limerick!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/1/2021 8:36:00 AM

Right on, John! As a once youthful figure skater, I fell through thin ice one moonlit night on a pond. Fortunately it was a shallow pond. As for spelling as I see 'em (or as I ear 'em) that I'll leave to you. Thanks for the stop by. Much appreciated, and a successful new year in all your spellings. / Maurice

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2021 7:38:00 AM

Yikes! Sounds like a tragedy is about to unfold, Jim. Reminds me of the movie "Angels Sing," a holiday fave. I hope you did well in Tania's contest. Maybe you will enter my next contest for perfect sonnets. To my faves this poem goes. Best wishes for the new year, Carolyn