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i breathe in the night and take it all in the smell of freedom the taste of letting go the power of choice i pause at this junction of what lies ahead a fork in the road a roll of the dice a vow to never look back i pause and time stands ever so still its silence hovering its perfume surreal its girth suspended i breathe in the night and take it all in AP: 3rd place 2023 Posted on January 8, 2023

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Date: 1/9/2023 7:26:00 PM
Ooh. You left me hanging there, suspended over the cliff. Nice touch, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2023 9:33:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon~

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