Pinpointing the Moment
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i breathe in the night
and take it all in
the smell of freedom
the taste of letting go
the power of choice
i pause at this junction
of what lies ahead
a fork in the road
a roll of the dice
a vow to never look back
i pause and time
stands ever so still
its silence hovering
its perfume surreal
its girth suspended
i breathe in the night
and take it all in
AP: 3rd place 2023
Posted on January 8, 2023
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2023
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