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dispersal of pink petals corrupted innocence

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/5/2021 10:16:00 PM

I think I understand it. Read it a couple of times ;)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thank you for trying hard, Angela:) Have a lovely day. // paul

John Michaels

Date: 11/19/2018 10:57:00 AM

Cleverly done, Paul; and powerful (yet subtle), if this means what I think it does! Kind regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thank you, John; pleased that you read deep between the lines! Best regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 2/21/2018 4:17:00 AM

I'm not sure how I missed this gem Paul. It took me a while pondering over it. I think I got your profound, sad message in the marvellous Haiku. The picture is missing - not sure why. I refreshed several times. Even so your message comes through. ...Maria :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thank you for reading and pondering, Maria:) I have reinserted the picture; still wondering why it disappeared in the first place! I've been trying to find out whose work it is, but so far with no success. I have a feeling I had found it on Pinterest. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2018 3:14:00 AM

- Marvelous haiku, Paul :) - (love your photo too) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2018 9:14:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise; glad you enjoyed both haiku and picture. Hugs // paul

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 2/11/2018 7:40:00 PM

Sizzling, Paul. Danggggggg!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/12/2018 9:09:00 AM

Hi Rhoda...thank you for stopping by. Hope you are not being over-worked:) Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2018 11:30:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Paul..

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement, Eve. Hugs // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/11/2018 10:56:00 AM

Brilliant haiku... You are a genius... I enjoyed it...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2018 3:16:00 PM

You are too kind, Supraja:) Thank you. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2018 5:13:00 AM

Wow!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2018 3:15:00 PM

Your 'wow' says it all, Kim...thank you. Regards // paul

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/11/2018 12:54:00 AM

Now, that's a clever Haiku, Paul. Great write. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2018 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Mr Viv (as Jan would say:)) Regards, my friend // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/10/2018 8:02:00 PM

Wow! Quite the coincidence! Some sizzle sparks must have landed on our wavelengths for sure, Paul :)) Such a dramatic, dynamic and multi-faceted Haiku.This is a compelling write my friend. Warmest wishes always my friend. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. With posting such haiku I take a gamble, knowing that grasping its meaning could prove to be elusive. // Thank you for your lovely reply; read it about half an hour ago. Glad that sunlight replaces dark clouds:) Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 2/10/2018 8:07:00 PM

Also, there is a reply to your question regarding J on your lovely 'Temptation: Lune' poem... :))