Pining

The knots have knots…God?
Threads of needing, want, desire;
passion spent on barren sod
left to burn on flaming pyre.

God, the knots have knots?
Nodes and nodules, full of spoor,
planted upon poisoned plots
hoarding, warmth, desire and more…

God, the knots have knots! 
Pulse, and pump; push, and explore
lose the beastly cankerous clots 
excrete angst, open the pore,

Free the knots, God, please…
By root and rote, the seedling pleads.


Contest: Me Against Myself
Date 6/30/11
D. Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/17/2011 3:18:00 PM
Hello there dear poet ! I'm going through my favz today, and of course you are in amongst mine favz, and for good reason ! What an excelent write Debbie ! Have yourself a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:50:00 PM
oh, debs.. quite disturbing yet so beautifully crafted.. bid congrats on your win! ;) huggs
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Date: 7/7/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Nicely penned!
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:58:00 PM
congrats with this knotty poem. hahaha. it sounds like naughty! yes, I remember this one. Very emoting!
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. I hope the knots will loosen for all of us...we do it to ourselves! Great way to describe our own angst!
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:20:00 PM
congrats on your fine win cory
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:31:00 PM
Great writing as usual Debbie. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:36:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contetst, Debbie
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:18:00 PM
An amazing feeling and an honor to be in the same list as you... Congrats Debbie....always Michael
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:42:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your fantastic win with this dynamic write ..another amazing piece of excellent poetry luv..enjoy...luv last two lines..oh..
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:32:00 PM
Ouch! but it is creative! Love...Amaan
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:07:00 PM
An insightful write here Debbie!Best wishes.
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:08:00 AM
sounds painful....LOL
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/1/2011 6:25:00 AM
sigh...humor as a relief from feeling pain
Date: 6/30/2011 10:22:00 PM
This sure has an intereting title and repeating line, the knot have knots! Love that line, Debs. This is one contest I can't touch with a ten foot pole.
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:52:00 PM
holy moly...just when I 'think" I have got it....LOL !! (would you check my haiku please?...I have edited after your comment...does it work now?? yikes, that form should NOT be so hard to get right...but obviously I messed up (ha so what else is new LOL !?)
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:18:00 PM
Excellent entry. Powerful and profound, Deb. A winner for sure. Lainie
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:48:00 PM
Excellent phrase (wish I had written this one..."knots having knots"....oh yes, the tangled knots(webs) we weave against ourselves...our own worst enemies we are. Great poem (I haven't tackled this theme yet..yours is terrific and is hard to top!!
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:21:00 PM
Hey lady; most effective with this soul ! I want to put this in mine favz if'n ya don't mind...and this is a reserved spot for the most gripping of writes for me to ponder at the later of dates. Touching dear poet ! Have a wonderful weekend Debbie...much love, james
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