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Pine Needle Enlightenment

I am the pine tree not this individual - pointing to the sun I am the planet not this individual - reaching for the sun I am the cosmos not this individual - orbiting the sun I am the I am not an individual - bathing in the sun

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 4:54:00 PM

Precisely so! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2023 3:57:00 PM

So interesting how you describe this!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/10/2022 7:41:00 AM

Insightful, P.M. I enjoyed you poem of expanded awareness. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2022 3:47:00 AM

This one left me with some questions so that makes some good poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Those pine needles are so useful, beautiful, and such a lovely shade of green. Thanks for sharing it and for visiting my work. Sara