Pillows in the sky


Pillows in the sky
float in the breath of the wind
slowly moving,  soft flying views
Time to rest in the clear space of mind
Pillows in the sky
waiting, shining, showing
all the special things to find
Clouds like these pillows, in the sky
are not the only reason
for rest and for dreams
It's all more than it seems

Heidi Sands

9/6/25

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:55 PM
Hello Heidi, the c louds do look like pillows in the sky. sometimes i see a shape of a person's heard on a pillow in the sky. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 9:39 AM
Hello Heidi, I often watch the sky for clouds. i enjoy every shape i see in the clouds. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 2:35 PM
Thank you for your comments. I like to see the formations of the clouds. Enjoy. Hugs :)
Maverick Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 1:02 PM
A 'seamless write' Nette..Fluffy and white.' A light delight..This read tonight Great result on potd.'
Sands Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Joe. I appreciate your comment - Heidi :)
M  Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 2:08 AM
Belated Congratulations Heidi for POTD! A lovely inviting write! Debx
Sands Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Thank you very much Deb :)
George Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 6:28 AM
Nature is providing everything to make us comfortable. The sky makes pillows for us. Sweet imagination. Congratulations Heidi on your POTD status.
Sands Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Yes. Thank you very much Valsa :)
Nicole Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:56 PM
You found me. :) I'm somewhere on a ' pillow in the sky, ' just floating on by. There's something so dreamy and magical about your words, Heidi. My heart is smiling. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you, always. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Thank you for your sweet comment. I appreciate your kindness. Blessings and hugs :)
Pettit Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 4:54 PM
Reminds me of Joni Mitchell's wonderful song "Both Sides Now". You describe clouds in a different, but delightfully descriptive way.
Sands Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 5:43 AM
Thank you Robert :)
Peck Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Very dream-inspiring. Congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Ann :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 10:31 AM
Cozy in the sky… Congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Hooray!!!! Love his wonderful "Pillows in the sky" write. Oh yes, now for some rest and dreams. Hugs... Have a blessed day as you dream and write away............
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Paula. Time for rest and dreams :)
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Wonderful comparison -- "Pillows in the Sky." Just lovely, Heidi. Congratulations on POTD. ~ Gershon
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Gershon :)
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Very lovely dear Heidi. Congratulations! :)
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Linda :)
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September 8, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Dear Heidi, Congrats on POTD. You have this wonderful gift for taking simple observations and revealing the layers of meaning beneath them. I love spending time in nature and sometimes the most profound insights come from just... noticing what's already there. Blessings, Dear Heidi, Daniel
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate your feedback :)
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September 8, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Lovely poetry. Soft and sweet and deep. Congratulations on POTD honours Heidi, enjoy your day! xomo
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
May Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:57 AM
A pillow on high to dream on, Congrats on POTD Heidi
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
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September 8, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Heidi, your poem is gentle in a way that stays with you. I felt something peaceful reading it. Nicely done...congrats on your special day.
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:55 AM
That is nice to hear. Thank you very much ! :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Heidi, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Thanks so much Tania :)
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September 8, 2025 at 3:21 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation! A fabulous metaphor. Congrats!
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Thank you very much Sara :)
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:09 AM
- Back with a congrats on your p.o.t.d., Heidi ... enjoy :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:55 AM
Thank you very much Anne - Lise :)
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September 8, 2025 at 1:00 AM
Lovely poetry Heidi, congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Thank you Beryl. I hope you have a nice day :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Heidi, congrats to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Thank you very much Tom :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Dear Heidi, your imagination abound. A lovely poem.
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Victor :)
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 1:56 AM
- Yes, they look like soft pillows ... a lovely poem, Heidi :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise . Hugs :)
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September 6, 2025 at 6:02 PM
a wonderfully light and airy poem with outstanding imagery that included a subtle message. A short masterpiece. Faving
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 6:12 PM
Thank you very much Sara. I appreciate the Fave too. I hope all is well :)
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September 6, 2025 at 1:51 PM
Submitted 9/6/25
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