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Pillow Play

We had a pillow fight My sister and me Out there in the campsite 'twas such fun and glee My sister hit me hard The feathers flew out In turn, I did bombard And she gave a shout We played with our pillows Laughing all the way Fluff floated like billows What an awesome spray! Spread on the grass below They tickled our feet We jumped up and down slow That day was a treat! 11.02.2021
Syllable count: 6.5.6.5 Photo #3 For Eve Roper's "Rhyming me a poem 2" contest

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Date: 4/13/2023 1:38:00 PM
So much fun when both kids are on each others beds and they face each other with their pillows. Who will be the king of the mattress? I dreamed I ate a giant marshmallow, I woke up and my pillow was gone. You have probably heard that one. This poem was fun, brought back childhood memories and is as cute as a button. :)
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Date: 11/23/2021 9:57:00 AM
A true delight of childhood captured in your delightful words and rhymes! Congratulations on your win. Blessings. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:43:00 PM
we chose the same image Jo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2021 8:55:00 AM
Hi Jo, Congratulations on your win! Charming and delightful! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/14/2021 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations!! What a fun poem!! This reminds me of my childhood with my sister. Your use of specific words to convey joyful feelings through actions showcases your talent! Great job! -Meghan
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Date: 11/14/2021 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jo. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/2/2021 12:08:00 AM
Fun poem, Jo. You seem to have enjoyed yourself.
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