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Pike Peak Dreary

~On Pike’s Peak in moonlight as fog lifted, the maiden of gloom appeared on her broom, this witch I saw her as her dress drifted, with multi colored socks and face filled pocks. ~The maiden of gloom appeared on her broom, she did screech, “Aren’t I a great beauty’s peach?” With multi colored socks, and face filled pocks, I impeached gruesome, eerie, ugly, wench . ~She did screech, “Aren’t I a great beauty’s peach?” I said, “Return to east, you gruesome beast!" I impeached gruesome, eerie, ugly, wench, as she wickedly danced the moonlit glen. ~I said, “Return to east, you gruesome beast!” She hissed and she retorted , “I’m a beauty!” As she wickedly dance the moonlit glen, she hissed, she squawked, in the moonlight she mocked. ~She hissed and she retorted, "I'm a beauty!" This witch I saw her, as her dress drifted, she hissed, she squawked, in the moonlight she mocked, on Pike's Peak, in moonlight, as fog lifted. For and in Honor of Paula Swanson And Contest: Back to Back

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Date: 3/21/2011 10:25:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you John for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:01:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
Excellent Pantoum here,John!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:55:00 AM
enjoyed this first time round, John, gets even better the more one reads. congrats on this awesome Pantoum. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:23:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear John.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest my friend.. a vibrant write.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:40:00 PM
Not only I find some humor, but I love the personification of this delightful look at nature....not so easy to do in the pantoum format!! Great job, John....love it!! I can picture the fog lifting over Pike's Peak!!
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:55:00 AM
Excellent poem, John - love it. Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 3/14/2011 11:01:00 AM
Good luck in the contest....This type can get confusing the longer the poem.....George
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Date: 3/14/2011 7:00:00 AM
Ultra dramatic read full of lovely dialogue to enhance this contest entry Moses.. good luck my friend.. truly awesome and creative technique here with a wonderful story line.. luv
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Date: 3/14/2011 6:23:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning John. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 12:44:00 AM
there's no telling these witches John, excellent poem this, thoroughtly enjoyed this. good luck in contest. Harry
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Date: 3/13/2011 8:26:00 PM
oh dear, john!! i am enthralled by this stirring and haunting piece with a meesage that people can't accept their own unkind behavior... best of winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:44:00 PM
This so good!!! you have done this contest right!! Thank you so much for your kind comments...Michael
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:03:00 PM
Wow, this is awesome, John. I could see the witch rebelling throughout your write so clearly. You made great use of the pantuom form too. The wicked witch of the East made a cool topic. Isn't it funny how some can't see their own ugliness? Wishing you success in Paula's contest, John. I haven't been able to finish mine -- hard form, but you did it so well! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:24:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 3/13/2011 1:42:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...I am glad that I am not going to that wedding...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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