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Pier-Perfection

pier-perfection measured stroll to its length flipping into mirth landing on the sailboat’s deck and holding on…for dear life pier-perfection strong sun, beholden wind horizontal spray leisuring at an angle hang-on-baby amusement pier-perfection observers as beached whales by no means diving in the sea chopping off their legs piers wooden pegs bending wills pier-perfection becomes a water slide bums not having fun turbulent waters teal blue nothing to show for their lives pier-perfection floating away, perfect sail for the dead beats… the hang-on-baby crowd seasoned-sailors on beach towels 7/2/2023

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Date: 7/3/2023 3:29:00 AM
Great last line dear Kimmie! A beach towel sailor LOL Lovesies, Poppa Jack XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 6:25:00 AM
Thank you…lol! xx
Date: 7/2/2023 8:55:00 PM
A peerless write, Kim! Very much enjoyed each stanza. Thank you, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 6:26:00 AM
Thank you! I had fun writing this! :)
Date: 7/2/2023 4:47:00 PM
Very intriguin poetry, Kim. Nice imagery and variety. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2023 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 7/2/2023 12:45:00 PM
This is such a good poem...perfection without peer! Fun to visualize all the pier parts you've written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2023 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 7/2/2023 7:31:00 AM
I assume you are a boat sailing the ocean. How observant you are, dear Kim. Your imagery is perfect. A dazzling example of poetic verse. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thank you! I would love to be doing that! I did go sailing once…was fun!

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