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Pieces of Me

Sometimes my words, memories and thoughts are far away from each other, making me to envy the clouds which are gaseous and misty, yet we see them far away, calling them "clouds". Sometimes people call me by my baptized name, but I wonder what name I can truly call myself; a being trying to hold his pieces together, as fate tries to blow them apart........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/22/2017 10:26:00 PM
This piece I love; it's depth, body, shape, direction, art on many levels, a 7 and a fave xomo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2017 3:51:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much Maureen, for your kind comment!! I really love your review about my work!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/22/2017 7:00:00 AM
This is beautiful :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/22/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Katheryn!! *^_^*

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