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Pieces of Me

The pieces of me have been scattered.
With force thrown to the lonely winds.
You didn't realize! my love mattered.

You say I am guilty I have sinned.
You dismantled me tossed me away.
With force thrown to the lonely winds.

I will be reconstructed one day.
The essence of me won't dissapear.
You dismantled me tossed me away.

Listen close to the winds you will hear.
Songs from the man I strive to be
The essence of me won't dissapear.

Do you recognize the sound of me?
Songs from the man I strive to be.
The pieces of me have been scattered.
You didn't realize! my love mattered.

Pieces contest written March 11th 2013

Modified Terzanelle to stay within sixteen lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/15/2013 9:09:00 AM
I'm sure if pieces of you were ever scattered and rebuilt, you would be stronger than ever before. Excellent write Rick! Hugs ...soupmail.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2013 10:22:00 PM
Providing all the pieces could be found.
Date: 3/14/2013 9:05:00 AM
The essence of you is just grand, Richard. Throw to the wind whoever made you feel that way! Gone with the wind....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2013 10:21:00 PM
Aww you are sweet
Date: 3/14/2013 9:04:00 AM
The essence of you is just grand, Richard. Throw to the wind whoever made you feel that way! Gone with the wind....
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:19:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, my man! This is brilliantly written and should do well or there should be an investigation!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/15/2013 7:29:00 AM
Much prefer this picture jack.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2013 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Jack, I don't know why but your new picture makes me think of the villan in James Bond called Jaws. Your scaring me jack*lol*
Date: 3/11/2013 10:26:00 PM
Beautiful and tragic. Best of luck with the contest. J
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2013 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 3/11/2013 5:54:00 PM
wondering what got cut.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2013 5:58:00 PM
nothing cut, I wrote it with the contest in mind.
Date: 3/11/2013 4:45:00 PM
wow, now if I were doing a terzanelle contest one day, this one would be HIGH on my list. I don't usually read one this good. WAy to be inspired by the pieces challenge.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 3/11/2013 8:42:00 AM
I've been discarded like that a few times in my life. A very nice read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I'm hoping you are a keeper in the end.
Date: 3/11/2013 7:53:00 AM
Well written, Richard - Good luck in the contest! - Wish you a nice new week. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2013 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise