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Pieces of Me-Ifl

I felt like... Pieces of me were scattered across the earth; lost. Leaving only my body intact. Too close to G-d: In the wind that dances with trees, The light evading shadows, and in the laughs of toddlers that walk hand in hand down the steep steps. She watches me. sometimes her eyes gloss over then stream. In these moments she remembers; She finds me and feels what she has lost.

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Date: 2/22/2023 7:25:00 AM
- A lovely piece of writing :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:02:00 AM
Fantastic write, Demi. Your feelings I can relate to. I am also honored to see that this was your first poem entered here in the Soup.. and it was for my contest :) Keep up the good works, my friend. A BIG Congratulations to you on your winning placement. Charlie
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Demi Keliihananui
Date: 2/21/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thankyou!
Date: 2/20/2023 8:51:00 PM
"She finds me and feels what she has lost" - great feelings are very beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:10:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Your first posted poem is a winner. God bless you.
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Date: 2/13/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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