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Pieces of Dreams

*Dedicated to a kind friend: She gives me hope, something to see On this road I am on, ahead of me Bringing some light, in clouds of gray As I try to move foward and find my way I watch the lively hummingbird fly Humming along as the days go by Hoping to hover along with such ease Someday with simplicity to please For now, I hold onto hope she gives Knowing she's right, something that waits Out there to welcome me, with all my traits Heidi Sands 5/19/19

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Date: 7/4/2019 10:25:00 AM
P.S It is a fav!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandy :)
Date: 6/1/2019 4:18:00 PM
A sweet poem, Heidu Panagiota. xoxo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 5/30/2019 3:52:00 PM
Hummingbirds fascinated me as a child, I was always getting stung by a bee or wasp because I'd try to catch the hummingbirds that were around our forsythia bushes. A lovely, tranquil pen.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2019 3:57:00 PM
Oh my about always getting stung ! The hummingbirds are facinating. I watch them each summer. They are territorial too. Many thanks for your supportive comments :)
Date: 5/25/2019 6:47:00 AM
What's out there is usually close by...A lovely write because of a friend...All the best Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2019 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 5/22/2019 1:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem Heidi - your friend is lucky to have you as a friend! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. That is kind of you to say to me. I appreciate your comment and all your support! Have a nice day :)
Date: 5/22/2019 7:01:00 AM
Sunshine of hope when skies are gray...Wonderful dedication Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 5/21/2019 2:45:00 PM
Great dedication; beautifully penned.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you very much M.L :)
Date: 5/20/2019 1:58:00 PM
there are parts of us that only a real friend knows... so endearing, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
You are right Nette. Thank you for your comment and all your support :)
Date: 5/19/2019 10:57:00 PM
Sounds like a special friend Heidi. Nicely penned
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Allen :)
Date: 5/19/2019 4:17:00 PM
Heidi, a wonderful write, there is nothing more precious than a waiting and accepting friend ~
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2019 4:28:00 PM
That's true. Thank you for your input :)
Date: 5/19/2019 12:33:00 PM
- A good friend who comforts and gives hope ... lovely, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2019 12:36:00 PM
Yes, you are right. Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/19/2019 12:29:00 PM
So nice to have friends that give comfort in time of need, Heidi..Well expressed feelings of hope and strength that emanate from caring vibes.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2019 12:36:00 PM
Friends are special. Thank you for your feedback Vijay :)
Date: 5/19/2019 10:58:00 AM
So beautiful, Heidi it speaks of peace and hope. The gentleness in your heart will guide you to your dreams. Hope is everything. I know your friend will treasure this lovely verse.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandy :)
Date: 5/19/2019 10:27:00 AM
Hello Heidi Sands, as i read this poem, I felt like i was there in this pieces of dreams. have a nice day my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2019 10:28:00 AM
Nice to see your comment Darlene. Thank you. Have a nice day :)

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