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"Fragments and the crumbs of life, all the little pieces"
                                                                          ---John Ruskin, 1853


                           Pieces of a man
                       who used to be whole
                         and chock full of life.
                He had a personality that shined 
          like the rays of a summer afternoon sun!

                 He had a silver tongue, to boot!
             He was a man of gripping eloquence.
               A gifted raconteur who captivated 
                      the neighborhood children 
                      with a cavalcade of stories.

                   He brought joy and laughter
            to so many. Unfortunately, a cruel fate 
                has befallen him! Pieces of a man
        who used to be whole; now cold and distant
            An unrecognizable ghost of his old self

                He has turned inward; retreated
          into a shell. The gleaming smile that once
     adorned his face, now faint; few and far between.
     Eyes that once sparkled like Esperanza diamonds,
             empty and lifeless. Who is this stranger?

        What has happened to this sunshine of a man?
    What became of his magnetic charm? His eloquence?
            What has robbed him of his beautiful mind?
         Unforgiving, the ravages of Alzheimer's disease
                Pieces of a man, crumbs of a tragic life...


All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 08/30/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/17/2022 11:11:00 PM
" Unforgiving, the ravages of Alzheimer's disease" - This, indeed, makes life miserable. Beautifully written work. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/18/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and visit, Christuraj:-)
Date: 9/10/2020 3:36:00 AM
Aah, the most scary part to lose one's thoughts to Alzheimer's....Congrats Edward, do take care.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/10/2020 4:26:00 AM
Yeah, it's very devastating:-( Thanks for the visit and congrats, Carol! God bless.<3
Date: 9/10/2020 2:33:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my challenge, All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/10/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 9/4/2020 4:24:00 AM
- A terrible disease ... so sad "to lose oneself" .... excellent poem :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a lovely weekend, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/4/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-) Have a blessed day, my friend!
Date: 8/31/2020 7:46:00 AM
Edward, what a gorgeous piece of poetry! A FAV. Very well grounded best wishes, Panagiota
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and FAV, Panagiota:-) I appreciate it!

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