Connie Marcum Wong Poet Free verse

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Pie Jesu

Let serene tranquility transport me
     To my highest poetic aspirations.
Let me feel the thrill, the chill, the bliss
     When this exquisite operatic song
Encompasses my entire body.
     Let the musical magic sustain in
Echoes of reflective contemplation.

When this music fills my yearning soul
     With Angelic reverberations...
A crescendo of divine harmonies is
     Showered in auditory pleasures
Tending to leave me a bit breathless 
     In awe of hearing heavenly sounds,
Making my heart reel in rhapsodies.

7-24-17
Pie Jesu inspired and performed by Forte, composed by Andrew Lloyd Webber
Pie Jesus is Latin for Merciful Jesus
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uwhzw1PKWgo
The Poet's Ear Contest
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Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 1:12 PM Hi Connie, this is a real poetic jewel, magical rhapsodies in words of wonder. This is such a beautiful song and this is such a beautiful piece of poetry. Your words paint such rapturous visions. This excellent gem is a definite fave Connie. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX Connie Marcum Wong January 4, 2019 at 1:29 PM Thank you so much dear friend. Isn't this music heavenly? xxoo : )

Lynn Marie August 22, 2017 at 6:15 PM This is gorgeous Connie. Your words fit so beautifully to the music. I shudder to think of a world without it. I often listen to it in other languages I have no clue as to the words or some instruments but the sounds move me all the same. Probably like poetry to me in that I don't comprehend meter etc. but I know how a poem's words make me feel. An inspiring piece, a joy to read and watch:) Connie Marcum Wong August 23, 2017 at 12:15 AM Thank you very much Lynn. It is one of my favorites. : )

Janis Medders Tobechi August 7, 2017 at 2:15 PM Connie, your images in these lyrics are astounding, "reel in rhapsodies" "crescendo of divine harmonies". I compliment highly on these metaphors. Well written. Connie Marcum Wong August 7, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thank you very much Janis. Did you hear the song? : )

Mario Vitale July 30, 2017 at 7:45 PM Personally I love poetrysoup, it gives the average entertainment Joe a voice that needs to be expressed to the masses. You guys have been to good to me so far. Just I hate opening up a can of worms that some people on this site seek to down rate or down play everything good up attempt to display. Look I know there are critics out there but positive reinforcement strengthens one’s heart. All this negativity & hate coming down is good for nothing. Like Michael Jackson’s song, “I’m looking a Connie Marcum Wong July 30, 2017 at 9:34 PM I am not sure I understand stand your comment Mario? Where's the hate in this piece? It is a lovely song that inspired this poem.

Eric Boddie July 28, 2017 at 5:24 PM the Mercy Of His Grace....can be found in even the darkest place....we just have to know where to look....I mean it remarkably resembles just a book....but TRULY, It Is our Greatest Power....and With It, we will never know the weakness needed to cower....powerfully Beautiful connie....;) Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2017 at 2:57 PM I agree Eric. I appreciate your lovely comment my friend. Blessings, Connie : )

Alexis Y. July 28, 2017 at 3:58 PM Hi Connie This is sooo beautiful and breathtaking. And so very well written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2017 at 3:03 PM Thank you Alexis. I appreciate that. I think this contest will be a challenge to judge, for sure! : )

Janice Canerdy July 28, 2017 at 3:31 PM This is SO BEAUTIFUL, Connie! Janice Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2017 at 3:04 PM Thank you very much Janice! Have a great weekend!=: )

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2017 at 1:45 PM - What a glorious beauty, Connie .... me breathless - Luck in the contest, for me a winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel July 28, 2017 at 7:57 AM Musical and magical genius, Connie:)

Joseph May July 28, 2017 at 7:29 AM Heavenly melodies...Great write Connie

Ralph Sergi July 27, 2017 at 8:10 AM Beautiful expression of words, Connie I am envious and in awe! Connie Marcum Wong July 27, 2017 at 11:31 PM Thank you for such a lovely comment Ralph. I appreciate it! xxoo

Winged Warrior July 27, 2017 at 7:28 AM I'm all ears, Connie...beautifully done my friend...god bless...^WW^ Connie Marcum Wong July 27, 2017 at 11:32 PM Thank you much WW. Music always inspires me. : )

Jean Murray July 26, 2017 at 3:29 PM This poem is such a visual pleasure Connie. Connie Marcum Wong July 28, 2017 at 12:27 AM Thank you very much Jean. I didn't do it justice but I tried! : )

Eve Roper July 25, 2017 at 9:24 PM Nicely done, Connie, tranquail music has always easied my soul. Luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2017 at 6:06 PM This is really lovely, Connie. If I were not so rushed, I would go listen to it. You are always led to things of beauty!

Paul Callus July 25, 2017 at 2:10 PM Beautiful...inspired and inspiring, Connie! I've heard this song before, but was never able to express in words what I felt within; you, on the other hand, did it with a capable pen! Well done! ~ Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 25, 2017 at 1:09 PM Extraordinary musings, Connie. You expressed spiritual manifestations w/intricate and graceful penning. Lovely poem thru out. Love and hugs.

Viv Wigley July 25, 2017 at 9:59 AM The Lord can speak volumes through music- man made, or the music of this turning world. And through nice poetry, and this is effortlessly beautiful. Good luck in the comp, Connie. Viv x Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2017 at 11:58 AM Thank you so much Viv. I have missed you! xxoo

Dean Wood July 25, 2017 at 8:50 AM Wow, so powerful. Hearing this music, I can see where you found inspiration. Nicely done Connie. - Dean Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2017 at 11:59 AM Thank you very much Dean. : )

Demetrios Trifiatis July 25, 2017 at 2:28 AM Music helps the soul harmonize itself with the cosmic being therefore no surprise there for being inspired to write such a beautiful poem dear, Connie! Good luck! Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2017 at 2:32 AM Music heals the soul and the body...thank you Demetrios. : )

Maria Williams July 25, 2017 at 1:28 AM Yes indeed Connie, the right music hits the cord and gives a spine tingling sensation. Your poem is as beautiful as the music and the picture adds just that little extra touch. All the best with the contest...Maria xxx Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2017 at 2:31 AM Thank you Maria. I don't think I did the song justice, but I tried. : )

Jan Allison July 24, 2017 at 6:32 PM you chose a most beautiful piece of music to inspire your poem Connie:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane July 24, 2017 at 6:16 PM ...and the violin section plays in soft accompaniment to your verses. The conductor lowers his baton and the audience stands in ovation. Simply captivating, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong July 24, 2017 at 11:45 PM It really is a beautiful piece Lin, thank you very much. : )