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Pie and Ice-Cream in Two Acts

"Look what they've done to my song, Ma" ~ Melanie Saftka

Act I – Pie (One bright morning)

my muse just wants pie
I huffed, “Okay, give it a try.”  
Pies begin with precision,
lovely decision.
I crave a treat, a sweet delight
one that brings a smile and makes my morning bright.
The popular apple and blackberry pie
Ah, just the thought makes me sigh.

Act 2 II – Ice-cream (Two hours later, on a yummy Sundae afternoon)

what fancy leads me on to dream
of sugar plums in frozen cream
I drool o'er yummy ice cream on my tongue
Thoughts of the tasty dish makes me so long
Betwixt lucky lips my eager tongue licks
A mouth watering afternoon dish fix
With a chuckle, he swore,
"I’ll just eat one more”.

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CayCay Jennings Date: 8/27/2025 6:06:00 AM I don't know where to begin but I do know I didn't want it to end. Such a delight, what are the words in your delicious masterpiece - "brings a smile and makes my morning bright.' I love, 'Gershon on the drums'. You got your witty on, my friend and we all get to enjoy it. I've no choice but to put this in my favs so I can take it out when I wish for another taste. Soooo good. So blessed am I to be the 1st line, I got this party started. Naw, twas your creative imagination. Poetry hugs CayCay Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/27/2025 11:20:00 AM You did start this party! When I read was your third line (and which I put as my first), I suddenly knew my direction. It was as if you were reading my mail - my mind just wants pie - bingo!

Emilia James Date: 8/27/2025 1:55:00 AM Wow! David. This is fantastic and you have done it so well. It flows superbly. Thank you so much for including me too. Best wishes for the contest. (I am hungry now lol.) Emilia : ) Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/27/2025 11:17:00 AM Thanks, Emilia! :-)

Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/26/2025 6:01:00 PM David, this is amazing, how you got it together must have taken some doing. Thank you for including some of my lines… Beryl Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/26/2025 6:36:00 PM Thanks Beryl, when it comes to pie, great minds think alike!

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/26/2025 4:06:00 PM Thanks for including me in this masterpiece, David. Lots of fun here. ~ Gershon, the Frozen One Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/26/2025 6:36:00 PM Thanks Gershon. It seems like a lot of us are on the same page when it comes to cake and ice-cream. Strange thing - I don't exactly know what a sugar plum is- lol.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/26/2025 3:57:00 PM wonderfully compiled with a flow. I'm impressed with what you did for this contest. Best wishes with the contest, Sara Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/26/2025 6:34:00 PM Thanks Sara, and thanks for your lines, including the ones that helped me end it.

Terry Flood Date: 8/26/2025 11:04:00 AM Uncanny how you remembered such an oculus 2nd line from almost a year ago. Smashing, compilation and all completely in context. Brilliantly done. All the best in the contest. Terry Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/26/2025 6:33:00 PM Thanks Terry! "Okay, give it a try" from your Glug seemed to be the right words for me talking to myself.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/26/2025 9:00:00 AM Oh Dave, my friend. This is wonderful! You did a great job and the quote is perfect! elle :) Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/26/2025 6:30:00 PM I liked your lines from "Pie" and thought they fit in pretty well. I also like your line "nut filled pastry chasm", it's very descriptive and makes me salivate - lol!