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Picture One Speaks I Hate

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On Monday we wash Water is needed The oldest child helps My chore is to walk Two miles to get wet, Cool water for Cleaning, baths, and Washing our clothes So I hate this Day, Monday My bare feet Get stuck, sore But on Tuesday Rest Written: Saturday, April 09,2014 Inspired by Contest Images That Make You Think Sponsored by: Silent One Picture # 1

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/10/2016 7:24:00 PM

Sad, but beautiful image you have drawn, Sara. Thank you for reading my poem : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 9:48:00 PM

Sara, Congratulations on your " Images that make you think WIN." Always ~LINDA~

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/23/2016 2:33:00 PM

Hi Sara, firstly, belated Congratulations on your win in the contest. The words do say it all Sara, they paint the picture our eyes see. An excellent take on the picture. We take too much for granted, what if we had to live this way. A thought provoking write Sara. It's a seven from me. Excellent write in this form. Hugs....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:21:00 PM

way to go, Sara. Congratulations.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/14/2016 2:03:00 AM

Interesting take on this not-so-cheery photo. Hope the Tuesday recovery is enough of a break ... we sure do take water for granted, unaware of the places that has to work very hard to get it. Best of luck on the contest, Sarah.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2016 8:23:00 AM

- Picture and words with a lot of emotion, as you have described great Sara - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Heemstra

Date: 4/10/2016 5:56:00 PM

I loved it very much! I've written several diminished hexaverses, but nothing like that! Wish you the best on the contest!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/10/2016 11:38:00 AM

Thanks for posting this gem, it is brilliantly penned.......A.M.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/10/2016 10:12:00 AM

Beautifully drawn a Monday's picture my sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/9/2016 9:54:00 PM

Stormy Monday - you tell the tale well! New form on me! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2016 9:40:00 PM

A unique entry in the contest. I much enjoyed it, Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2016 5:16:00 PM

i can so relate with this splendid write, sara.. wrote one about monday some days back... ohh so good!..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2016 5:03:00 PM

Great interpretation of the image Sara - we are so lucky in the western world we take so much for granted:-(good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/9/2016 4:23:00 PM

It may be hard for some people to understand, something as accessible to us as water is not even available to over half the world's population. I think you have interpreted the photo extremely well. Good luck Ms Sara. Peace and God bless:):)