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Craig's Picture on the Parlor Wall Contest  ~  9/26/24

Picture on the Parlor Wall

She'd been staring at me since I can recall.
A da Vinci saccharine smile painted on her lips
that I'd traced with fingertips in my youth.
Forsooth wondering, "Who are you, comely lady,
and why does no one ever mention your name?"

Eyes of melancholy, but not a tear had she spilled.
For years now, I'd asked that the truth be told
why she'd been given a place on the parlor wall,
yet no one speaks of her with honor or a trace
of how gracefully she sat on that stiff backed chair.

A fetching look adorned the face of this exquisite lass, 
whose lustrous raven hair was released from its chignon.
What sin had she committed that's kept her story hidden
and her name omitted or deleted from the family Bible?
In gold gilded frame, what blame does she still carry?

What thrust and parry duel must she have fought,
perhaps for love. Her presence hangs in oils but despoiled.
Aged painting of this alluring woman remains a mystery
to me, but I see in her eyes, a familiarity I recognize
each time I peer into the mirror on the vestibule wall.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Very cool, Lin! Congratulations on your win! Fave.
Lane Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Thanks a bunch, Kim. I didn't want to stop writing about this one.
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:00 AM
Lin, an excellent poem. I enjoyed your description of the painting to be both melancholy and mysterious, what a story she could tell. Congratulations on your top placement in the contest.
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Good morning and thank you for enjoying my descriptive lines. She took on a life once I found the portrait.
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your win dear Lin!
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Thank you so very much, Karen. I just left you a congrats comment on your winner.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 3:24 PM
You certainly brought her to life with your descriptive write Lin ... if only the paintings could talk ! hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 6:15 PM
Thank you for seeing her as I do, Jan. She was a German woman, married to a Russian. I want to think she was happy with life. I'll just believe she was in the 1800s.
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Haunting and mesmerizing all at the same time, Lin! This enigmatic portrait prompts some beautiful poetic musings and questions from you and your muse. Love the line about the duel! Best wishes for a win! Blessings. BTW - are you in Helene's path? Sending prayers.
Lane Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 4:46 AM
Thank you very much, Sam. All is well with my family. Lots of wind and rain but only slight damage.
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 9:30 PM
In my prayers as this wild lady blows through town.
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Hi, Sam and thank you for your thoughtful remarks. I had the displeasure of a visit from Hurricane Francine a few weeks ago. Helene is visiting my daughter in Winter Garden tonight. It's a suburb on the fringes of Orlando. Praying all stays sturdy because Helene is a bigger windbag that Francine. Thanks for your concern. ;-)
Narain Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Great poem. Always a winner.
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Thank you.
Lawless Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 6:49 AM
gee, I wonder who will place second in the contest....an alluring write Lin.
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 7:57 AM
John, your humor is only, but barely, outdone by your poetic wit. It's a Craig contest and usually I get an N/A. I do it for the challenge. This one didn't present itself as a means to rhyme and since I didn't 'go there' it was mostly a 'just shut up and write kinda moment. Thanks for being you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 5:30 AM
More brilliant writing from your gifted pen Lin, when going around stately homes I often see paintings like that and wonder what their stories are. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Merci, Tom. I found her portrait after writing this one early this morning. She seemed to fit exactly the kind of woman I envisioned. I checked to see if it was AI disapproved. HAHA Not paranoid at all but it checked out as being 100% by my own hand.
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