Pictorial of Stained Glass

Written: November 05, 2023
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Glittering glass on gossamer ground 
untamed saffron blaze tackles its task 
a flawless waltz

Beaded up pristine runaway stars
In a bright, shimmering stream
weave shards of light onto a string of pearls
speaking upon ageless beauty.

I'm facing the sky
toward shards of dwindling light
patterns devoid of time

When daylight has faded
a caramelized lion and Noah ark coexist
placing my palms upwardly focused

With you in mind, I venture outside
rhapsody vibes under Moon candle
dreams seep into reality.

My heart, a litmus of love, triggered
emotional turmoil.

I just wish to offer you the best
of myself.

beautydevotionemotionsfree verse

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Deb M

November 7, 2023 at 1:31 PM

Lasaad you have such a incredible way with words and imagery! Wondrful poem! Debx

Sally Eslinger

November 6, 2023 at 9:01 PM

Pure perception in totality …outward from within. I have felt lkewise, but could never have stated it so well

Bill Baker

November 6, 2023 at 4:49 PM

Your poem takes its reader into an experience of illumination and inspiration, my friend. It reminds me of an out-of-the-body experience, being lifted up into the presence of the unknown with only remnants of brief moments of reality sprinkled into your experience. Intriguing poetry and a enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your exquisite poetry, my dear friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

November 6, 2023 at 5:14 AM

Beautiful images, splendid word art, well done, my friend. I like the romantic touch that enhances the beauty of your poem.

Victor Buhagiar

November 6, 2023 at 12:36 AM

Brilliant poem. Great alliteration. diction and imagery. You write wonderful poetry. Blessings.

Ink Empress

November 5, 2023 at 7:29 PM

I love how you’ve written this free verse! With alliterations and deeply heartfelt emotions woven in such eloquence, seeing you weave words without rhymes is different but also feels light and soul warming! Runaway stars! Thats so deep! And i love that! Unique way of describing stars! So metaphorical! “ weave shards of light onto a string of pearls“ gorgeous how you get so descriptive and creative with your lines! “ My heart, a litmus of love, triggered emotional turmoil.“ so touching! Fave!