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Picnic For Two

In a field of clover and buttercup A romantic picnic for two laid out Eye on her watch as her heart swells with doubt So worried he’ll work late and stand her up Any time but not tonight would be forgivable As she can barely contain herself should she explode Hours of planning this escapade from their abode The mounting anticipation is quite unbearable And here he is, the darling, right on cue Just in time for the rain to catch them by surprise Who cares! When she gets to look into his eyes And let him know how much she loves him Getting drenched but nothing dilutes their joy That newlywed feeling is overpowering He reads her mind, she can’t hide a single thing Life will change forever… the baby’s going to be a boy AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on October 24, 2018 for contest TELL ME A STORY sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 11/2/2018 12:48:00 AM
Good Job Friend! Nice Finish
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 11/1/2018 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Well deserved
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/1/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, White Wolf. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2018 11:33:00 AM
Beautifully done! (Although... technically it was a "picnic for three"?!) ;D Lovely story, enjoyed it!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2018 11:48:00 AM
The thought did cross my mind... LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 10/25/2018 11:32:00 AM
What a sweet surprise! I wanted to cheer like I was getting kin folk :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2018 11:49:00 AM
LOL so sweet. Thanks for your wonderful visit and comment, PS.
Date: 10/24/2018 10:44:00 PM
Beautiful ending, Line. So optimistic!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 10/24/2018 9:19:00 PM
A joyful little piece, Line, like the ending, too. Viv x
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/24/2018 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, Viv, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/24/2018 9:05:00 PM
Very nice! Love the setting and surprise!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/24/2018 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. You are a lovely incurable romantic. Line xx

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