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Picnic

As I embark on the beautiful path. Vibrant aromas capture my senses. The allure of the daffodils are such a delight. A gentle breeze causes roses and daises to do a beautiful waltz right before my eyes. Far off in the distance I hear water playing lovely music. As my journey comes to an end I'm standing on a little hill, I turn my attention to the most amazing waterfall. Yes this is the perfect place for my picnic and I can't wait.

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Date: 2/9/2018 2:46:00 PM
Very nice imagery Alexis! I saw your scene so vividly. Great job!
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:11:00 AM
Lovely imaginary...reminds me of my stay in Rome.
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Date: 2/6/2018 1:17:00 PM
O... lovely thoughts of summer. Beautifully done, Alexis.
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:08:00 AM
Hi Elex. This is an upbeat write with lovely imagery and sings of a beautiful season. PS. line 12 - "an". hugs!
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:54:00 PM
lucky you find your picnic, excellent write Alexis
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:23:00 PM
Lovely imagery which takes hold of our senses, Alexis! Enjoy the picnic:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/7/2016 8:57:00 AM
Finally, the spring has arrived! Invigorated, strong, beautiful and hopeful! I love it and you know the reason, dear Alexis! A seven! However you have to correct the spelling of your title: Ha-ha!
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:25:00 AM
Lovely imagery Alexis, very tranquil.
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