Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

Pickles

She was fat, not pregnant, to say the least.
She filled her plate at the family feast.
Craving pickles brought her down.
Howling laughter brought her frown.
Flatulence increased, festivities ceased!

© Dane Smith-Johnsen
October 16, 2010

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Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2010 at 8:59 PM hahaha ,I see why PD placed it high!! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser November 15, 2010 at 12:48 PM hehe, nice one Dane Ann. Laughable images I see. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2010 at 10:16 AM Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman November 15, 2010 at 9:04 AM Cute one Dane, Congratulations on your ace. Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak November 15, 2010 at 7:20 AM Funny write, Dane Ann. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Tahera Mannan November 14, 2010 at 8:49 PM HAhaha. Wow Dane Ann. I really laughed with your limerick. Many congratulations for this super win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 14, 2010 at 7:46 AM Congrats Dane Ann on your first place win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent write and win..luv.. enjoy your sweet victory my friend this happy Sunday with lots of luv..

Barbara Gorelick November 14, 2010 at 7:20 AM yikes,,this one is to funny. congrats on your iwn. BG

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2010 at 6:05 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta November 14, 2010 at 4:36 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane

Poet Destroyer A November 14, 2010 at 4:13 AM Congratulations on your 1 st place in my contest,,had fun readng every single entry,,p.d.

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2010 at 9:21 PM hahaha VERY good one, DAne Ann, I almost missed seeing yor comment to me tonight. Glad I caught it!! Luv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse October 26, 2010 at 5:33 AM funny!!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 26, 2010 at 5:02 AM Nice humorous write on pickles with good images, Dane