Pickles

She was fat, not pregnant, to say the least. She filled her plate at the family feast. Craving pickles brought her down. Howling laughter brought her frown. Flatulence increased, festivities ceased! © Dane Smith-Johnsen October 16, 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 8:59:00 PM

hahaha ,I see why PD placed it high!! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2010 12:48:00 PM

hehe, nice one Dane Ann. Laughable images I see. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/15/2010 9:04:00 AM

Cute one Dane, Congratulations on your ace. Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/15/2010 7:20:00 AM

Funny write, Dane Ann. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/14/2010 8:49:00 PM

HAhaha. Wow Dane Ann. I really laughed with your limerick. Many congratulations for this super win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 7:46:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your first place win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent write and win..luv.. enjoy your sweet victory my friend this happy Sunday with lots of luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/14/2010 7:20:00 AM

yikes,,this one is to funny. congrats on your iwn. BG