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Pic Motifs: Visual 2

he devours the delusion of inhalation, with each breath another shroud appears- exhaling the obscurity of recreation, leaving a threshold for his fears. smoky veils never expose life’s uncertainties. 29 words total in this poem PIC MOTIFS Nette Onclaud November 15, 2017

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Date: 11/21/2017 8:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this creative piece luloo! : )
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Date: 11/21/2017 4:48:00 PM
Laura, this is wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:57:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:57:00 PM
Yes, I agree with Nette. Very thought provoking. BIG congrats on a wonderful win.
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Date: 11/20/2017 3:00:00 PM
such rhythmical flow and thought-provoking lines make this a winner, lou... big congrats and thanks for coming by!
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:35:00 PM
- Such a great imagery Laura, congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:20:00 AM
Amazed at how you depicted this picture with your apt words, Luloo:) please check your soupmail and mail...
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