Photostory 2

Photostory 2

Inquisitive in nature born
But lacking tools to fuel his thoughts
His family did not share his gifts
Just toiling hard and to exist

Hs ebon hair and tiny hand
picked up a pencil in the sand
Then slowly walked to his abode
With rolled up paper from the bread

He sat upon a soiled bench
And cut his paper into three 
And with his pencil he did draw
his shapes and lines creating art

intrinsic to his value sought
The soft lead pencil shaded deft
he held the paper oe’r his head
And smiled, accomplished what he did

Photostory Contest
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November 27, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sergi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Creative with a wonderful flow that create art
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Did this one get judged yet? I don't see congrats so maybe not. It sure deserves a win. I recall seeing it before and I really like it.
Ashley Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Ralph, creative juices can't help but flow, when and where it must, as in your poem. A beautifully written and original piece of shining poetry my friend. Good luck in the contest but already a winner with me.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Sergi Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:41 PM
THANK YOU, SUSAN!
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Here's to art in all its forms and here's to the people it creates. You are a winner!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:37 PM
So I see you were creative as a child as well. No wonder you are such a master at this art of poetry! I hope to see this sweet entry take top honors Ralph! : )
Sergi Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:37 PM
THANK YOU, CONNIE.
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Very creative, thoughtful response to the picture, well-written, Ralph. Janice
Cresswell Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 2:47 PM
All the wonder and creativeness of a child without the fear we acquire as adults.
Sergi Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Hi Pat: That was me as a little child.
Michael Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 5:13 PM
A lovely story... Success will surely follow...All the best Ralph...
Vaso Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 1:09 AM
I like your interpretation, nicely done!
Sergi Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 5:01 PM
I meant the bread paper
Sergi Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur When I was little , I used to draw from thread paper.
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Oh, this could describe the little boy I was writing about too. I thought that was the most interesting of the three pics. WELL done, Ralph.
Sergi Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Andrea
Tripp Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Awwww This is very sweet, Ralph. Very lovely words with the photo
Sergi Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Rhoda, nice to know you.
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 2:12 PM
such a heartfelt poem from your shining quill, ralph... huggs
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