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Phoney Money

With a wallet full of plastic ... 

     credit cards to shape my social classification 
     phone cards so I can stay informed 
     a debit card that always goes in debt 
     a card declaring my citizenship and identification 
     a card insuring me good health, long life and liberty 
     gift cards that help curb my defamation 

The more I owe, the more I glow dimly 
All caught up in attaining the American Dream 
Yet pale and lustered from self-affirmation 
That it’s okay to be lost and confused 
That it's okay to be me, not alone in
Paying homage to a false god that sucks
Souls and drains my pocketbook into the red 
With lots and lots of stuff 
I can’t take with me when I’m dead 

There was, once upon a time 
When “In God We Trust” was the norm 
Card sharking, once illegal, considered a scam 
Something only criminal minds or the mob would dare 
Is now commonplace and no one seems to care 
That it’s all consuming, eating us alive 
Of all what is left of any dignity 
At an alarming high percentage rate 
With fake news and empty promissory notes 
And the only cost is to conform 
To having counterfeit consciousness 
As conscientious as confetti 

I’m flabbergasted and plasticized.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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July 9, 2025 at 3:20 PM
Been there done that, Ben. A poem that many will relate too. As I got older ... 80 currently. I learned to return to the philosophy of enough. I try to enjoy life in the present and only use credit on a monthly basis for convenance. My credit score when to 850, the top and I never have to worry about money problems. I no longer have season tickets to pro sports games and vacation in the country I live in. LOL I'm certainly not rich, but I have enough. Have a great week! Bill
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