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thirsty phoebe lands 'pon birdbath rim, flies away.... below freezing morn

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/6/2023 6:14:00 AM

ah ~ no water. lovely haiku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2023 6:58:00 AM

Right, Line. It was frozen so that he/she could not get a sip. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/6/2023 12:45:00 AM

Denied necessities instill the willpower to survive--a wondrously concise expression, Sara, Aloha William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2023 5:07:00 AM

I appreciate the kind review of my work, William. Your visits are inspiring. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/5/2023 1:53:00 PM

A lovely image apt for the current Winter!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 11:36:00 PM

Kim, A little cold for us this winter but trees and flowers are trying to say it is time for spring. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/5/2023 9:17:00 AM

This is so lovely. I love it :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 12:33:00 PM

Why, thank you, Fin. I like the smile. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/5/2023 5:35:00 AM

I felt the dynamic images as it landed and flew away..so well written, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 7:40:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. It was dynamic for me. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/4/2023 8:02:00 PM

A well written haiku, Sara ! I can visualize the scene so clearly. The bird after appeasing its thirst, flying away !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 7:32:00 AM

Valsa, Sometimes in nature things don't work out like we think. Sad to say that bird did not get any water because of the ice. I went out after he/she was there and poured two cups of hot water so the ice would melt. I did not see the phoebe come back but of course; I did not stand there all the time. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2023 4:55:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, love the visual...Harry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 4:59:00 AM

Why, thank you, Harry. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/4/2023 1:57:00 PM

Hi Sara, What a lovely picture to accompany your well written haiku. Great job. How are you? I hope your New Year is going so far. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2023 4:57:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Alexis. So far, the year is going well. Phoebes are an interesting species. I enjoy watching them and seeing their nests. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2023 8:02:00 AM

- A long and cold winter for small animals .... lovley haiku, Sara - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2023 10:12:00 AM

I think this one has been worse than it has been in awhile here. Thanks for the kind review, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your reading my work and taking time to comment. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/4/2023 7:38:00 AM

A fine example of a haiku. You're very adept at them.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2023 10:11:00 AM

Why, thank you, Victor. I needed that uplifting comment today. Sara