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Phobia

No flame within! do I hold for you no delightful delicacy shall I put to rhyme. No picturesque words in italics of your woeful wildlife, no acknowledgement of the ancient mariner, he that crossed the margin of our “Atlas of the world.” (Still in use, [I believe] in the old stone museum.) One can easily live in fear of your many mordant moods, to see you capture the embracing horizon, where warring clouds fondle the sunlight, and the departing QE 2 is reduced to microcosm. How can one live in awe of you, when at the end of each day you snatch at the light of sustenance, therefore giving license to the veil of damnation, soon to be cast out of the east, driving impending fears to languish upon the unholy waters of the Styx? (An extraction of the mind, an evaporation of the memory the spray dried brain tossed into oblivion.) Yet each morning an interval to one’s ongoing nightmare, when with renewed levitation, the new light reprieved! Begins avidly it’s universal journey across Manukau’s “Pack ‘n’ Save” Car park. Oh yes! It is so easy to hate you; you that brought the rest of the world here, you that constitutes a world within a world, that, where the cycle of life creates it’s own constitution, each player judged on cue, to become an act of fodder, mobile supermarkets in ferocious competition with nothing at all to give. “Unless death itself is a gift!” Upon the surface your treachery still lingers, there, tenacious tentacles lurk within the sedulous surf, groping blindly at sedated rocks, those pinnacles of sanctuary that harbour the weary, support the rod. Only when gravitation truly intervenes, does the perpetual invasion subside, leaving one in no doubt about your promiscuity! © Harry J Horsman 1993

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Date: 5/6/2021 6:33:00 AM
Hi Harry, what an impressive write you have here. Of course everyone knows you are a great poet. I have read several of your poems this morning and this one has some wonderful lines that just popped out for me, "where warring clouds fondle the sunlight," how beautifully descriptive.
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:34:00 AM
I just read this winning poem of yours. Excellent write!
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:02:00 PM
Great drunken write...(burp! burp!) hahah...Very impressive, Harry! How's those eyes doing!? :) gwendolen
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Date: 10/23/2012 11:50:00 AM
My sweet friend, you have covered a vast space of internal phobia with scientific example. Thanks for giving time to read my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:47:00 PM
It's always better slamming the words than slamming the door! Excellent rhythm with the clever use of enjambements, bringing suspense to what's coming next... I love this one very special write. Congratulations on your great win, Harry. And many thanks for your comments on my work.:) Hanitra
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:02:00 PM
Congrats Harry! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:20:00 PM
Harry, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:09:00 PM
Congrats. Good Job. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 10/19/2012 5:05:00 PM
Harry--u went all out with this contest and it really paid off! Glad to see this wonderful poem celebrated at the top!! Horray! gwendolen
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win, Harry! hugs:) LG
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:33:00 AM
congrats on a great win Harry
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Date: 10/19/2012 4:43:00 AM
well done old mate, its really great, to hear of your win right here, with depth of word, well written, heard, a poets comentry....
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Date: 10/19/2012 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2012 1:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fantastic write!
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Date: 10/19/2012 12:14:00 AM
A VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM.BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS ON YOU WIN FRIEND HARRY!! LET'S CALL FOR A CELEBRATION..CHEERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^)
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Date: 10/18/2012 3:39:00 PM
Harry, intense and insightful...what can I say? You put your heart into this one! Sorry, my email is a mess. I have reported it and hope it can be fixed. If you report it, too, maybe it would be helpful...I am the new kid on the block... Thanks for the wonderful comments...Victoria PS I hate no 3 in anything...until next time...HA
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Date: 10/18/2012 3:26:00 PM
Halleluyah and Pip PIP hurray you won number one today! Good on you my friend. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/17/2012 9:05:00 AM
This is a poem that wouldn't suffice to be read just once, but many times...this seems to hold so much meaning-- as I was reading this, the word "full" pops to mind and just captivated me-- so many great lines here-- one of my favorite stanzas is "(An extraction of the mind, an evaporation of the memory the spray dried brain tossed into oblivion.)". In a word: Awesome poem, harry!
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Date: 10/17/2012 5:57:00 AM
Who could love a phobia? Not even lovers of hydrinaline.
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:30:00 PM
oh wow xx
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Date: 10/15/2012 5:35:00 PM
I agree with the comments--what a powerful poem. Thanks for the effort and posting it. It has been a great pleasure reading some of your brilliant pieces today. Keep up the amazing work. I love how it later becomes clear what the phobia is. Keeps the reader mesmerized throughout. Lovely and oh so intense.. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/14/2012 6:49:00 PM
ahhh verse 2 ancient mariner! sea refferance..second to last stanza the word harbour..okies. I would be clearer in stanza one that you fear the sea. [ex: though your tides ebb and flow with maudlin majesty etc] Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:54:00 AM
great write Harry,speechless
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:44:00 AM
Must be a woman because of the line "of your many mordant moods"..Ha!...Enjoyed reading ...Sara
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