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Phenomena Prism House - Paul Jenkins 1983

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it was beyond my control yet every aspect and tilt my movements directed precisely until out of my control momentum gathers prediction possible guided to the point of intentional chaos creating a window in which to view the outside or the inside or the space between almost like a ouija board I'm reflected in the glass opaque and without sight plumes of empty inbetween cloud the vision further "hold thy nerve" just a sliver of intrigue before the weight of what I see begins to crush me dissect my face hide the secrets beneath my skin replace my eyes with marbles some things you shouldn't see

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Date: 11/6/2023 11:57:00 AM
You really have some abstract imagination Dilly, and are totally fearless in tackling bizarre imagery, always nice to see the ouija board get a mention, especially without any intended menace, I’ve no connection to make here with the cosmos you’ll be glad to hear, or have I, some things you shouldn’t see lol! Cheers David
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Date: 11/6/2023 12:02:00 PM
Maybe I stopped short of revealing the secrets of the universe because you've blown my cover as someone from the future who knows too much haha (or should I say *awkward laugh* "hahaha hah")

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