Phantom

Shhh! Comes night, time tunnel enters 
into my mind at rapid speed ;
and from the click of the dream weaver
my body  is brought to nowhere land :
out there, a  galaxy hangs beyond clouds
as  unknown strangers pop, following
my footsteps on through darkened byway... 

A  Lady In White grips my quivering hands;
her face eyeless as if in a ghastly trance,
this trance  costing my soul to rip in awe:
I bleed non-stop , yelling  upon a rope
of thorns as foggy shadows flutter.
Pulsing , the Lady assaults this subconscious
fog living  inside my id, my ego , as if
to wake past thoughts needing release 
but denying final closure from deep hurt.

Lo, phantom come, breathe out the fear.



For Line Gauthier's Contest: A Stunner January 2018
3/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:22 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:10 AM
This is wonderful, Nette - congratulations! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Nette, lovely written write and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 2:33 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Nette :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 10:54 AM
What charming rhythm and most effective tone from the start with your first word. Well done, nette. Congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:47 AM
Exquisite Nette! I was enchanted! : )
One Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Damn sounds spooky, you catured the earrines of this really dramatically.. well expressed Nette...
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