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Phantom

Shhh! Comes night, time tunnel enters into my mind at rapid speed ; and from the click of the dream weaver my body is brought to nowhere land : out there, a galaxy hangs beyond clouds as unknown strangers pop, following my footsteps on through darkened byway... A Lady In White grips my quivering hands; her face eyeless as if in a ghastly trance, this trance costing my soul to rip in awe: I bleed non-stop , yelling upon a rope of thorns as foggy shadows flutter. Pulsing , the Lady assaults this subconscious fog living inside my id, my ego , as if to wake past thoughts needing release but denying final closure from deep hurt. Lo, phantom come, breathe out the fear. For Line Gauthier's Contest: A Stunner January 2018 3/16/2018

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Date: 3/21/2018 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 3/18/2018 3:10:00 AM
This is wonderful, Nette - congratulations! :-) <3
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Date: 3/17/2018 6:06:00 PM
Nette, lovely written write and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Date: 3/17/2018 2:33:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Nette :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 10:54:00 AM
What charming rhythm and most effective tone from the start with your first word. Well done, nette. Congrats.
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Date: 1/24/2018 1:47:00 AM
Exquisite Nette! I was enchanted! : )
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Date: 1/23/2018 2:35:00 PM
Damn sounds spooky, you catured the earrines of this really dramatically.. well expressed Nette...
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