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Phantom

In the deepest corner of the room a shadowy figure lurks in the blackness still as a soldier, curiously I creep toward it, close enough to feel its breath I gently reach out, jerking back instantly it doesn't move its feet Phantoms aren't real I try to convince myself, transparent and silent as ghosts are sluggish and light moving, suddenly its vanished as all ghostly figures eventually do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2018 8:33:00 PM
Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Mikayla - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 3/19/2018 7:32:00 AM
You adjective and adverb usage make this poem a resounding success, Mikayla. I would like to see much more of your poetry.
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