Petrified Halloween

In full moon’s mystic frame hungry wolf’s silhouette howls,   
in the creepy stillness a tall figure in black cloak comes out  
through the spiked rusty gate of a castle on the smoky hill.
Arms stretched wide he wafts in air like a hooded black bird 
like the Count used to do in Transylvania, as the story goes. 

When the moon reaches the canopy of the starless slate sky, 
I see petrified, the dark figure standing in shade outside my door, 
the cold blue gleam of the eerie night smeared on the ashen face. 
Before I could retract I find myself clasped in his strong arms,
with wolf's red eyes glaring, fangs piercing his bloody lips pressed 
on my jugular vein, in hoarse voice he says “your blood I will sip, 
you will turn to a vampire, in Dracula’s castle you will live with me”. 

October 11, 2020
Contest : Halloween Fright
Sponsor : Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 10:39 AM
- Boo ... evil spirits dance for this contest :) - Congratulations on your great Halloween poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chamberlain Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 1:34 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your win. :-)
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:35 AM
I love this line: "...the cold blue gleam of the eerie night smeared on the ashen face." Another great write Subimal! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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October 15, 2020 at 10:29 AM
You set the scene for Halloween perfectly, Subimal. A horror-filled night indeed. Congratulations on a first-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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