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Petrified Halloween

In full moon’s mystic frame hungry wolf’s silhouette howls, in the creepy stillness a tall figure in black cloak comes out through the spiked rusty gate of a castle on the smoky hill. Arms stretched wide he wafts in air like a hooded black bird like the Count used to do in Transylvania, as the story goes. When the moon reaches the canopy of the starless slate sky, I see petrified, the dark figure standing in shade outside my door, the cold blue gleam of the eerie night smeared on the ashen face. Before I could retract I find myself clasped in his strong arms, with wolf's red eyes glaring, fangs piercing his bloody lips pressed on my jugular vein, in hoarse voice he says “your blood I will sip, you will turn to a vampire, in Dracula’s castle you will live with me”. October 11, 2020 Contest : Halloween Fright Sponsor : Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 10/16/2020 10:39:00 AM
- Boo ... evil spirits dance for this contest :) - Congratulations on your great Halloween poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2020 1:34:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 10/15/2020 11:35:00 AM
I love this line: "...the cold blue gleam of the eerie night smeared on the ashen face." Another great write Subimal! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/15/2020 10:29:00 AM
You set the scene for Halloween perfectly, Subimal. A horror-filled night indeed. Congratulations on a first-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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