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Peter Holmes

Little boy curls, sweets, and treats, lots of love, When granny meets Big boy, cigarettes, booze, and “love” Uni, work, much too hard, heavens above! Wife number one. Crazy, 5 months; I’m gone. Wife number two, only wanted money, but two great Daughters filled my heart. Then a stranger came in our shade; I’m off! Enough! And new start made. Chinese wife was number three, dim sum at weekends, scented tea; But told many lies, short time, cries. No more dim-sum; now eating pies, Fractured love, attracting flies. Retired with pension, not too large, should I live on a barge? The winter’s cold, so didn’t dare; off to South East Asia I did repair. My darling wife, she’s number four, the best of the lot; (She loves me more) Now I’m treated like a king, and gladly purchased golden ring. Sugar in the morning, cream at night, best of all, we rarely fight. Now in clover with my honey, some would say, that’s kind of funny, At sixty two, you’ve waited long, for love’s sweet note, to sing its song. Yes indeed, the truth is *****, how crooked, early life did steer; dark clouds Haunt my dim dark past; but now only sun, with Vietnam lass. Written for Bio contest 17/042014

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Date: 4/27/2015 4:45:00 PM
Interesting marriages and divorce account..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:16:00 AM
Peter, Congratulations on your "Bio of a Poet" WIN!!! LINDA
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:14:00 AM
Peter i loved this Lines, Now I’m treated like a king, and gladly purchased golden ring. Sugar in the morning, cream at night, best of all, we rarely fight, I often love to call my self King, too and i tend to treat myself like i have A castle Congs on winning brother
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Date: 4/19/2015 1:49:00 PM
Nice to met you, Peter, a little more each time, congratulations on your win, a7. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win Peter. Now we know you have Little boy curls and I'm glad you are happy with wife number 4....Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:21:00 AM
this is so interesting! So she is from Viet nam. I ate at a viet namese place just like week. I hope she cooks for you as well as they did the food at that restaurant. It's also funny that the fourth wife was a charm and not the third. Maybe YOU have simply grown up and were now prepared for a grand love!!!
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Date: 4/17/2015 9:22:00 AM
Wow! This is pure awesomeness! I have truly enjoyed reading all of these bios. I must admit this one ties as my favorite! I was hooked from the beginning and laughing until the happy ending. What a beautiful life story you have to tell! Excellent, excellent write! Thank you so much for lifting my spirits this morning! A definite 7!
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Date: 4/17/2015 3:30:00 AM
Wow you have been on a rollercoaster of marital disharmony - so glad you found the right one in the end - loved the honesty in the write Peter - these bio poems give such a fascinating insight into the person behind the pen:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx 7 xx
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