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My pet wasp is called Sunny Jim I captured this pet on a whim He got out his stinger And stung my friend’s finger Pal Susie just cannot stand him! Poor Susie lets out a loud howl As Sunny Jim’s still on the prowl I cannot deny My 'pet' needs to die … I smothered wasp Jim with a towel Inspired by a crazy challenge set by an on line pal .. to write a poem about a pet wasp! 07/04/21

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Date: 8/6/2021 12:53:00 PM
Jan, it's fun to write for a challenge, and you certainly were up to this one. Lots of fun, thanks for the smile. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/11/2021 2:45:00 PM
Ha ha! This is brilliant Jan... You must thank your pal for setting you the challenge because the result is excellent !!
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Date: 7/10/2021 6:59:00 PM
Jan. You are still here and can still make an old girl smile. Wonderful Poem. Love Kathy coillins
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Date: 7/7/2021 12:40:00 PM
Ha!! this is cute, jan. I am sure you will come up with something for the elemental contest. I think he wanted all three elements mentioned, so that is all you need to try for (unless I got that wrong) well, finally I am caught up here. now to get back to my food storage project. I have a ton of stuff to organize before Natalyn comes to spend the night!!
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Date: 7/6/2021 5:05:00 PM
Hello Jan … You’d make a fortune Jan if you wrote a book on how to tame a wasp. I can tame them, but it’s with fly spray - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 7/6/2021 3:22:00 PM
Jan, very funny indeed as are the comments and poem in the comments . The people love their animals and it's risky to even think of hurting one. So, you have talent and courage!
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Date: 7/6/2021 5:21:00 AM
I like the creativeness of this one. Way to go. You could have fed him to your owl. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 7/5/2021 11:30:00 AM
Jan, Loved your Limerick in humour with a pesky pet warning. Sunny Jim, yes! -Richard
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Date: 7/5/2021 7:42:00 AM
Once there was a wee wasp that Jan named Sunny Jim/When he stung her friend's finger, twas the end of him/I filed a PETA complaint/In a voice without restraint/ Jan cried out, "I'll get you, Jenna. Your future's grim!"
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Date: 7/5/2021 7:28:00 AM
I'm thinking of making a call to PETA on you.
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Date: 7/5/2021 5:13:00 AM
This is a pet that I would never want Jan yet, your very amusing Limerick somehow makes it cute!! Happy Monday xxoo
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Date: 7/5/2021 2:10:00 AM
Hi Jan,so funny.poor little thing.lol Take care.simon:):)
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Date: 7/5/2021 2:00:00 AM
You are so funny Jan! I appreciate your hilarious poetry!
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Date: 7/4/2021 7:52:00 PM
This struck me quite funny.. luv it :)
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Date: 7/4/2021 5:25:00 PM
Lol, Nice one Jan
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Date: 7/4/2021 5:03:00 PM
Lmao - another good one Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2021 3:42:00 PM
You set the site abuzz with your funny witty humoristic romps . We need more of that and less seriousity Much love Jan, sent on a bumble with powerful wings :)
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Date: 7/4/2021 2:12:00 PM
Funny, with writers block came by to read some poetry and get inspired, hope I said that correct in english.
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Date: 7/4/2021 1:25:00 PM
- Sunny Jim ... with this sweet face ... and with a wonderful smile ... had to pay with his life ... cute poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:59:00 PM
Hi Jan, I love this !!! So creative and fun and funny all in one. Love the ending! All the best, Susan :)
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:47:00 PM
You certainly come up with some good ones Jan, and the wasp will get no sympathy from me, your a gentle soul just smothering him, my method is a little more crude lol, great imagination, cheers David
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:35:00 PM
I always thought u were a bit twisted. Now I'm sure of it. Best wishes...
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Date: 7/4/2021 11:32:00 AM
Pity you did not have time to train to sting mosquitoes, yellow jackets, etc., or to eat aphids, but you met the challenge! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/4/2021 9:32:00 AM
she got bitten by a White Anglo Saxon Protestant.......
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Date: 7/4/2021 8:53:00 AM
Good job, Jan. You certainly took care of the situation!
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